A Defining Moment

She screams out in pain Anguish and exhaustion painted on her face If I had it within my power Her discomfort I would erase As she gives birth to our son
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Joe. Love Carol
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December 2, 2012 at 6:38 PM
Joe.. CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 5:34 PM
a very empathetic one, Joe. Congrats on your HM.
Guzzi Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 3:12 PM
What a hard but happy day..when our children were born, you have a girl too? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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December 1, 2012 at 7:35 AM
Big congratulations on your HM Joe xx
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November 30, 2012 at 5:29 PM
Congratulations on your very well written poem in Debbie Guzzi contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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