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A Deer In Road

a deer in road snowflakes falling a still in headlights 11/27/11

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2011 7:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/6/2011 1:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win x

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/5/2011 10:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this fine Haiku Susan. Well done.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/5/2011 4:38:00 PM

well done in a proper form and unique in style. Thank you Susan for your comments. they have given me the chance to see a touch of your talent. You have acquired a new reader

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/30/2011 11:08:00 AM

Wonderfully penned 'still in headlights'. Enjoyed. Thanks for commenting on my write. bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/28/2011 7:41:00 PM

Hello Susan, one can get so blinded with strong headlights... enjoyed your poem... hope the deer made it... xox..p.d.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/27/2011 8:39:00 PM

Its a beautiful thing..but sometimes the poor deer gets the short end. Still, I love to see deer at night. Well done. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2011 3:50:00 PM

I like how you played on the phrase of a deer caught in headlights but did not come our and say it that way. Love the imagery with the snowflakes too.