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A Deer In Road

a deer in road
snowflakes falling
a still in headlights


11/27/11

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Carol Sunshine Brown

December 6, 2011 at 7:59 AM

Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 6, 2011 at 1:30 AM

Congratulations on your win x

Bob Quigley

December 5, 2011 at 10:56 PM

Congratulations on your win with this fine Haiku Susan. Well done.

Robert A. Dufresne

December 5, 2011 at 4:38 PM

well done in a proper form and unique in style. Thank you Susan for your comments. they have given me the chance to see a touch of your talent. You have acquired a new reader

Bl Devnath

November 30, 2011 at 11:08 AM

Wonderfully penned 'still in headlights'. Enjoyed. Thanks for commenting on my write. bl

Poet Destroyer A

November 28, 2011 at 7:41 PM

Hello Susan, one can get so blinded with strong headlights... enjoyed your poem... hope the deer made it... xox..p.d.

Barbara Gorelick

November 27, 2011 at 8:39 PM

Its a beautiful thing..but sometimes the poor deer gets the short end. Still, I love to see deer at night. Well done. BG

Andrea Dietrich

November 27, 2011 at 3:50 PM

I like how you played on the phrase of a deer caught in headlights but did not come our and say it that way. Love the imagery with the snowflakes too.

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