Notes About The Poem

Lies seem to achieve short term gain, however, in the long run, the damage that deception causes is unhealthy for the person being deceitful.

A Deceptive Poem

We deceive and we fib,
To fulfil a desire.
We tell ourselves
We aren’t really a liar.

We might be afraid
Of what others suspect,
Of being exposed
As mentally wrecked.

We might be afraid
Of being detected,
But every lie leaves
Us more disconnected.

From peace, trust , and friends
From people and repute.
Lies leave us aware
We are filling with guilt.

So don’t white lie, don’t fib.
Don’t deceive nor distort.
Since when all is done,
It’s to the mirror you report.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 3:53 AM
Oh ho!..:D so true, every word. Nicely penned. :) Congrats.
Inman Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 2:29 AM
Sound advice Lewis, enjoyed the write.
Kinch  Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 9:55 AM
This is brilliant and so true. Well written!
Raynes Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 4:04 PM
Thankyou Elizabeth
Renitah Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 8:00 AM
TRUE THAT you just made me feel small about this lie and you know what am gonna say the truth now or never
Raynes Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Thanks Phionah, good luck and all will be fine, truth is always a better bed fellow.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 5:57 PM
True, true and true.
Raynes Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Thanks Iris.
A   Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:10 PM
Anytime
A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 3:38 PM
AWESOME POEM. LINDA
Raynes Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Thanks Linda
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