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A December Memento

Started on a happy note that foggy cold December day
School being closed, for adventure, our spirits craved
After breakfast, with my cousins, I joyfully set out to play 
Catching fish was our pastime, ill luck we always braved
That day, into the pond I fell, but by a stranger, miraculously saved

Dec.7.2022

A December Memento Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich 

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/24/2022 7:15:00 PM that is quite the memory, Valsa. CUTE!! And congrats in my contest. Login to Reply

JCB Brul Date: 12/10/2022 6:41:00 AM Oh, this reminds me of my first born son. When he was 4 he dived into the fountain pond and fortunately saved by a stranger. Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 12/8/2022 6:10:00 AM God placed that stranger there! Lovely, expressive poem, Valsa. Janice Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 12/8/2022 5:55:00 AM Glad a stranger saved you. Great poem, a narrative in such short lines. Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 12/7/2022 9:02:00 PM Thank God for that stranger, Valsa:) Login to Reply

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 12/7/2022 4:16:00 PM Thank God, Valsa, someone was there! Narrating a story in five lines is quite hard! Yours is so well-written! Love and best wishes ~ Mala Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 12/7/2022 10:51:00 AM There are some experiences that never end up leaving us. Valsa, thank Goodness that he was watching out for you on that particular day. Best wishes for the contest Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/7/2022 5:47:00 AM Some memories stay with us forever. Best to you, Valsa. Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/7/2022 5:21:00 AM God was looking out for you that day Valsa, thank God that stranger was walking by. Best of luck. Tom Login to Reply