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A December Memento

Started on a happy note that foggy cold December day School being closed, for adventure, our spirits craved After breakfast, with my cousins, I joyfully set out to play Catching fish was our pastime, ill luck we always braved That day, into the pond I fell, but by a stranger, miraculously saved Dec.7.2022 A December Memento Poetry Contest Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2022 7:15:00 PM

that is quite the memory, Valsa. CUTE!! And congrats in my contest.

Jcb Brul

Date: 12/10/2022 6:41:00 AM

Oh, this reminds me of my first born son. When he was 4 he dived into the fountain pond and fortunately saved by a stranger.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/8/2022 6:10:00 AM

God placed that stranger there! Lovely, expressive poem, Valsa. Janice

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/8/2022 5:55:00 AM

Glad a stranger saved you. Great poem, a narrative in such short lines.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/7/2022 9:02:00 PM

Thank God for that stranger, Valsa:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 12/7/2022 4:16:00 PM

Thank God, Valsa, someone was there! Narrating a story in five lines is quite hard! Yours is so well-written! Love and best wishes ~ Mala

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/7/2022 10:51:00 AM

There are some experiences that never end up leaving us. Valsa, thank Goodness that he was watching out for you on that particular day. Best wishes for the contest

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/7/2022 5:47:00 AM

Some memories stay with us forever. Best to you, Valsa.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/7/2022 5:21:00 AM

God was looking out for you that day Valsa, thank God that stranger was walking by. Best of luck. Tom