Valsa George Poet Quintain (English)

A December Memento

Started on a happy note that foggy cold December day
School being closed, for adventure, our spirits craved
After breakfast, with my cousins, I joyfully set out to play 
Catching fish was our pastime, ill luck we always braved
That day, into the pond I fell, but by a stranger, miraculously saved

Dec.7.2022

A December Memento Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich 

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Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2022 at 7:15 PM that is quite the memory, Valsa. CUTE!! And congrats in my contest.

JC Brul December 10, 2022 at 6:41 AM Oh, this reminds me of my first born son. When he was 4 he dived into the fountain pond and fortunately saved by a stranger.

Janice Canerdy December 8, 2022 at 6:10 AM God placed that stranger there! Lovely, expressive poem, Valsa. Janice

Victor Buhagiar December 8, 2022 at 5:55 AM Glad a stranger saved you. Great poem, a narrative in such short lines.

Joanna Daniel December 7, 2022 at 9:02 PM Thank God for that stranger, Valsa:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury December 7, 2022 at 4:16 PM Thank God, Valsa, someone was there! Narrating a story in five lines is quite hard! Yours is so well-written! Love and best wishes ~ Mala

Sotto Poet December 7, 2022 at 10:51 AM There are some experiences that never end up leaving us. Valsa, thank Goodness that he was watching out for you on that particular day. Best wishes for the contest

Vijay Pandit December 7, 2022 at 5:47 AM Some memories stay with us forever. Best to you, Valsa.

Tom Cunningham December 7, 2022 at 5:21 AM God was looking out for you that day Valsa, thank God that stranger was walking by. Best of luck. Tom