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A Debutante's Ball To Remember

A Debutante’s Ball to Remember
In the autumn of my life, oft have I recalled that superb summer night, when I finally experienced my long-awaited heart’s delight. Family and close friends were all ready for my entry into society, to celebrate it with a grand debutante’s ball filled with gaiety.
In a dreamlike state, I felt like a princess with a golden crown, making my grand entrance wearing a champagne chiffon gown. With matching gloves, and a pair of satin shoes on my tiny feet, my auburn hair was adorned with butterflies and posies sweet.
The ballroom was magically transformed with gas lights all aglow, and a glittering chandelier reflected on a highly polished mahogany floor. As the orchestra played, my body and soul were enraptured and consumed by its rendition of Ravel’s enthralling “La Valse” which pervaded the room.
Elegant ladies were all dressed to the nines in exquisite pastel gowns of winter white, baby blue, powder pink, pale peach and beautiful browns. In tacit competition to out-best each other, social charms were well-honed, as they daintily fanned themselves and gossiped animatedly in hushed tones.
Refined gentlemen in their finely-tailored tails navigated the room to mingle, keeping an eye out for eligible heiresses beautiful, graceful, and single. Wafts of mild masculine colognes came from discretely dabbed faces and hair; while the fresh feminine floral scent of French perfumes permeated the air.
Armed with a full dance card, I waltzed the night away with ardent admirers, curtsying and coquettishly smiling, moving on to more exciting suitors. My enchanting evening climaxed with Strauss’s “Vienna Waltz” filling the hall. Oh, what a tale I will have to tell as my granddaughter prepares for her first ball!
11-21-2014 Contest: Your Favourite Old Poem (06-08-2015) Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Placement: 1st Contest: Ballroom Delights (12-16-2014) Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Placement: 2nd

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Date: 6/25/2015 1:12:00 PM
I can visualize and feel every single line. Beautifully written Pandita
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/26/2015 8:51:00 AM
Many thanks, dear friend for always complimenting and generously supporting my works! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 6/10/2015 3:21:00 PM
Hello Pandita, good to read this shining write that won top spot in Shadows contest..'
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Date: 6/10/2015 7:06:00 PM
Hey Joe, Many thanks, my friend for visiting and leaving me your wonderful comments and compliments! Have a great day! Pandita
Date: 6/9/2015 11:40:00 AM
WOW, Pandita.... :) Congratulations awesome win... SKAT
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Date: 6/10/2015 7:05:00 PM
Thank you so very much, SKAT A for taking the time out to congratulate me. I appreciate the applause! Pandita
Date: 6/9/2015 7:01:00 AM
Hi, Pandita! I Enjoyed reading your poem and congratulations on your top win. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 6/10/2015 7:03:00 PM
Dear Darlene, I am so happy that you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for your sweet compliments and I hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Pandita
Date: 6/8/2015 10:13:00 PM
Huge congrats on a fine win and a truly fantastic poem. A7..
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Date: 6/10/2015 6:58:00 PM
Hi Robert, thank you so very much for your wonderful continued support for my work! I always appreciate getting feedback and compliments from you. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 6/8/2015 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations Pandita, this is exceptional and such a wonderful story one can slide into and re-live with its reading. Well done
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Date: 6/10/2015 7:00:00 PM
Dear Mark, you helped to brighten my day with your great compliments and high rating! Thank you so much for visiting. Best wishes always. Pandita
Date: 6/8/2015 7:48:00 PM
Wonderfully written, Pandita. . .definitely a winning entry and sounds like the dancer won as well.
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Date: 6/8/2015 8:14:00 PM
David, thank you very much for stopping by with your superlative compliments. Warmest regrds. Pandita
Date: 6/8/2015 6:36:00 PM
Pandita, congratulations on your placement with this beautiful write
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Date: 6/8/2015 8:13:00 PM
Many thanks, dear friend for always complimenting and generously supporting my works! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 6/8/2015 5:45:00 PM
You described the scene well, Pandita! Congrats on taking top spot in the contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/8/2015 8:10:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, Kim! I appreciate your kind congratulations! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 6/8/2015 5:41:00 PM
dropping back again with my congrats Pandita:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/8/2015 8:09:00 PM
Dear Jan, thank you again for your always kind support! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 6/8/2015 5:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win, Pandita!!! An absolutely delightful poem, full of elegance. Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/8/2015 8:08:00 PM
Many thanks, dear Paul for your wonderful compliments ans support! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 6/8/2015 4:27:00 PM
I loved this poem Pandita you so well described a ball out of history so very grand please soup mail me your address so I can send you your prize and congratulations on 1st place hugs 7
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Date: 6/8/2015 7:04:00 PM
Shadow, I am so very delighted with this wonderful win! Thank you so very much for this great honour and I am so happy that you enjoyed this piece. Being a period piece fan, I was glad for an opportunity to draw from that particular time in history. I will be sending you my address asap. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 4/26/2015 4:42:00 PM
Oh Pandita, thank you so much for the sweet reply. I really do appreciate supporting all soup poets. HUGS...LINDA
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Date: 4/6/2015 7:28:00 PM
What a great experience thanks so much for sharing not many get to feel this way! Light & Love
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Date: 4/7/2015 10:35:00 AM
Dear Debbie, I am so happy that you enjoyed this piece! One of the joys of poetry, like a good story, is that it can give us a brief respite from our daily stresses and transport us into quite another world! Enjoy a beautiful day! Pandita
Date: 2/12/2015 1:27:00 PM
Sounds like a magical night.... :) quite the imagery :)
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Date: 4/7/2015 10:33:00 AM
Dear Angie, many thanks my friend for visiting and leaving me your wonderful comments! Have a great day! Pandita
Date: 12/26/2014 9:33:00 PM
PANDITA, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/26/2014 11:22:00 PM
Dear Linda, you helped to brighten my day with your great compliments! Thank you so much for visiting. Best wishes always. Pandita
Date: 12/19/2014 12:49:00 PM
Hello Great pen Pandora. I pay EXCELLENT GRATITUDE TO YOU.
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Date: 12/24/2014 8:18:00 AM
Hi Valerie, thank you so much for visiting and leaving me your wonderful comments! I wish you a very merry Christmas and a happy New Year! Pandita
Date: 12/16/2014 4:43:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your win, beautiful poem. Bless you
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Date: 12/16/2014 7:29:00 PM
Eve, many thanks for your sweet compliments, my friend! Pandita
Date: 12/16/2014 1:21:00 PM
A superbly penned poem! Full of details and delightful to read. Congratulations on your win Pandita
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Date: 12/16/2014 7:29:00 PM
Brenda, I appreciate your kind compliments. Thanks very much! Pandita
Date: 12/16/2014 11:50:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Pandita:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/16/2014 7:28:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Jan. I appreciate the applause! Pandita
Date: 12/9/2014 12:26:00 PM
Enchanting chant of common recollection dancing imagery in a glass managerie of noble souls.Best regards,O.B
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Date: 12/9/2014 4:13:00 PM
Many thanks, my friend for visiting and leaving me your wonderful comments! Have a great day! Pandita
Date: 12/7/2014 8:19:00 AM
Another fine poem you have crafted my friend. This rates very high in every category and was indeed a pleasure to read this fine morn. A well needed delight after a long and bad week... Super 7 on this and I think it deserves a solid 10!
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Date: 12/7/2014 10:47:00 AM
You greatly warmed my heart and my day! Robert, I am so humbled by your superlative compliments and ratings! And I very much appreciate the applause and superior rating. Thank you so much! I do pray that the coming week will be a better one for you, my friend! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 12/1/2014 8:39:00 PM
truly outstanding beautiful pen pandita
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Date: 12/2/2014 8:05:00 AM
Hi Liam, I am grateful for your wonderful compliments which I greatly appreciate. Thank you my friend! Warmest regards, Pandita
Date: 12/1/2014 7:44:00 PM
Lighthearted, it comforted, someone feeling quite depressed. Great imagery, described prettily, I was transported, felt like I danced myself! Great write Pandita. Kim Patrice :)
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Date: 12/2/2014 8:03:00 AM
Thank you dear Kim, I am so happy that you enjoyed this piece! One of the blessings of poetry, like a good story, is that it can give us a brief respite from our daily stresses and transport us into another world. Kim, thank you so much for the wonderful compliments! Have an enjoyable day, my friend! Warm hugs to you, Pandita.
Date: 12/1/2014 12:02:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/1/2014 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, thank you Ravi, for complimenting my work in such a superlative way! I am thrilled to receive your support and encouragement. Warmest regards, Pandita.
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