A Debutante's Ball To Remember

A Debutante’s Ball to Remember
In the autumn of my life, oft have I recalled that superb summer night, when I finally experienced my long-awaited heart’s delight. Family and close friends were all ready for my entry into society, to celebrate it with a grand debutante’s ball filled with gaiety.
In a dreamlike state, I felt like a princess with a golden crown, making my grand entrance wearing a champagne chiffon gown. With matching gloves, and a pair of satin shoes on my tiny feet, my auburn hair was adorned with butterflies and posies sweet.
The ballroom was magically transformed with gas lights all aglow, and a glittering chandelier reflected on a highly polished mahogany floor. As the orchestra played, my body and soul were enraptured and consumed by its rendition of Ravel’s enthralling “La Valse” which pervaded the room.
Elegant ladies were all dressed to the nines in exquisite pastel gowns of winter white, baby blue, powder pink, pale peach and beautiful browns. In tacit competition to out-best each other, social charms were well-honed, as they daintily fanned themselves and gossiped animatedly in hushed tones.
Refined gentlemen in their finely-tailored tails navigated the room to mingle, keeping an eye out for eligible heiresses beautiful, graceful, and single. Wafts of mild masculine colognes came from discretely dabbed faces and hair; while the fresh feminine floral scent of French perfumes permeated the air.
Armed with a full dance card, I waltzed the night away with ardent admirers, curtsying and coquettishly smiling, moving on to more exciting suitors. My enchanting evening climaxed with Strauss’s “Vienna Waltz” filling the hall. Oh, what a tale I will have to tell as my granddaughter prepares for her first ball!
11-21-2014 Contest: Your Favourite Old Poem (06-08-2015) Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Placement: 1st Contest: Ballroom Delights (12-16-2014) Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Placement: 2nd
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Burman Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 1:12 PM
I can visualize and feel every single line. Beautifully written Pandita
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June 26, 2015 at 8:51 AM
Many thanks, dear friend for always complimenting and generously supporting my works! Warmest regards. Pandita
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June 10, 2015 at 3:21 PM
Hello Pandita, good to read this shining write that won top spot in Shadows contest..'
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June 10, 2015 at 7:06 PM
Hey Joe, Many thanks, my friend for visiting and leaving me your wonderful comments and compliments! Have a great day! Pandita
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June 9, 2015 at 11:40 AM
WOW, Pandita.... :) Congratulations awesome win... SKAT
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June 10, 2015 at 7:05 PM
Thank you so very much, SKAT A for taking the time out to congratulate me. I appreciate the applause! Pandita
Gifford Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 7:01 AM
Hi, Pandita! I Enjoyed reading your poem and congratulations on your top win. Blessings, Darlene
Sietesantos Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 7:03 PM
Dear Darlene, I am so happy that you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for your sweet compliments and I hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Pandita
Lindley Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 10:13 PM
Huge congrats on a fine win and a truly fantastic poem. A7..
Sietesantos Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 6:58 PM
Hi Robert, thank you so very much for your wonderful continued support for my work! I always appreciate getting feedback and compliments from you. Warmest regards. Pandita
Trichet Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 9:36 PM
Congratulations Pandita, this is exceptional and such a wonderful story one can slide into and re-live with its reading. Well done
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June 10, 2015 at 7:00 PM
Dear Mark, you helped to brighten my day with your great compliments and high rating! Thank you so much for visiting. Best wishes always. Pandita
Fisher Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 7:48 PM
Wonderfully written, Pandita. . .definitely a winning entry and sounds like the dancer won as well.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 8:14 PM
David, thank you very much for stopping by with your superlative compliments. Warmest regrds. Pandita
La France Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 6:36 PM
Pandita, congratulations on your placement with this beautiful write
Sietesantos Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 8:13 PM
Many thanks, dear friend for always complimenting and generously supporting my works! Warmest regards. Pandita
Merryman Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 5:45 PM
You described the scene well, Pandita! Congrats on taking top spot in the contest! Love, Kim
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June 8, 2015 at 8:10 PM
Thank you, thank you, Kim! I appreciate your kind congratulations! Warmest regards. Pandita
Allison Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 5:41 PM
dropping back again with my congrats Pandita:-) Hugs jan xx
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June 8, 2015 at 8:09 PM
Dear Jan, thank you again for your always kind support! Warmest regards. Pandita
Callus Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 5:02 PM
Congratulations on your big win, Pandita!!! An absolutely delightful poem, full of elegance. Hugs // paul
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June 8, 2015 at 8:08 PM
Many thanks, dear Paul for your wonderful compliments ans support! Warmest regards. Pandita
Hamilton Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 4:27 PM
I loved this poem Pandita you so well described a ball out of history so very grand please soup mail me your address so I can send you your prize and congratulations on 1st place hugs 7
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June 8, 2015 at 7:04 PM
Shadow, I am so very delighted with this wonderful win! Thank you so very much for this great honour and I am so happy that you enjoyed this piece. Being a period piece fan, I was glad for an opportunity to draw from that particular time in history. I will be sending you my address asap. Warmest regards. Pandita
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April 26, 2015 at 4:42 PM
Oh Pandita, thank you so much for the sweet reply. I really do appreciate supporting all soup poets. HUGS...LINDA
Guzzi Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 7:28 PM
What a great experience thanks so much for sharing not many get to feel this way! Light & Love
Sietesantos Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Dear Debbie, I am so happy that you enjoyed this piece! One of the joys of poetry, like a good story, is that it can give us a brief respite from our daily stresses and transport us into quite another world! Enjoy a beautiful day! Pandita
Thomas Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 1:27 PM
Sounds like a magical night.... :) quite the imagery :)
Sietesantos Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 10:33 AM
Dear Angie, many thanks my friend for visiting and leaving me your wonderful comments! Have a great day! Pandita
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 9:33 PM
PANDITA, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Sietesantos Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 11:22 PM
Dear Linda, you helped to brighten my day with your great compliments! Thank you so much for visiting. Best wishes always. Pandita
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December 19, 2014 at 12:49 PM
Hello Great pen Pandora. I pay EXCELLENT GRATITUDE TO YOU.
Sietesantos Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 8:18 AM
Hi Valerie, thank you so much for visiting and leaving me your wonderful comments! I wish you a very merry Christmas and a happy New Year! Pandita
Roper Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 4:43 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your win, beautiful poem. Bless you
Sietesantos Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 7:29 PM
Eve, many thanks for your sweet compliments, my friend! Pandita
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 1:21 PM
A superbly penned poem! Full of details and delightful to read. Congratulations on your win Pandita
Sietesantos Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 7:29 PM
Brenda, I appreciate your kind compliments. Thanks very much! Pandita
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 11:50 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Pandita:-) hugs Jan xx
Sietesantos Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 7:28 PM
Thank you so very much, Jan. I appreciate the applause! Pandita
Bocsa Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 12:26 PM
Enchanting chant of common recollection dancing imagery in a glass managerie of noble souls.Best regards,O.B
Sietesantos Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 4:13 PM
Many thanks, my friend for visiting and leaving me your wonderful comments! Have a great day! Pandita
Lindley Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 8:19 AM
Another fine poem you have crafted my friend. This rates very high in every category and was indeed a pleasure to read this fine morn. A well needed delight after a long and bad week... Super 7 on this and I think it deserves a solid 10!
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December 7, 2014 at 10:47 AM
You greatly warmed my heart and my day! Robert, I am so humbled by your superlative compliments and ratings! And I very much appreciate the applause and superior rating. Thank you so much! I do pray that the coming week will be a better one for you, my friend! Warmest regards. Pandita
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December 1, 2014 at 8:39 PM
truly outstanding beautiful pen pandita
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December 2, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Hi Liam, I am grateful for your wonderful compliments which I greatly appreciate. Thank you my friend! Warmest regards, Pandita
Nunez Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 7:44 PM
Lighthearted, it comforted, someone feeling quite depressed. Great imagery, described prettily, I was transported, felt like I danced myself! Great write Pandita. Kim Patrice :)
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December 2, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Thank you dear Kim, I am so happy that you enjoyed this piece! One of the blessings of poetry, like a good story, is that it can give us a brief respite from our daily stresses and transport us into another world. Kim, thank you so much for the wonderful compliments! Have an enjoyable day, my friend! Warm hugs to you, Pandita.
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December 1, 2014 at 12:02 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs.
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December 1, 2014 at 3:48 PM
Thank you, thank you Ravi, for complimenting my work in such a superlative way! I am thrilled to receive your support and encouragement. Warmest regards, Pandita.
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