A Death Too Soon Haiku For Mw

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from my Death Haiku series...

The actual title of this piece, which I cannot offer as formatted is:

A Death (Too Soon) Haiku (for MW)


A Death (Too Soon) Haiku (for MW)

Alive-
Heaven...
What rhymes with a five?

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Stephe Watson

Date: 6/1/2017 11:00:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Old Buck for taking the time to share you responses. I value every word...and the heart behind them. Thank you. I proclaim you a Twelve (out of ten) Point Buck!

Old Buck

Date: 5/31/2017 9:22:00 PM

Shari: Someone said once: To have friends, you must first be a friend. I always thought that sounded trite but true. Maybe your to look ahead and be a bridge builder. :o) Thanks for sharing so well, what are probably very common feeling of many of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck

Old Buck

Date: 5/31/2017 8:58:00 PM

Carol: I'm sorry for laughing but I'm an old fella that has been in lot of those "no argument" situations. :o) Thanks for sharing so well your thoughts on the topic with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck

Old Buck

Date: 5/31/2017 8:34:00 PM

Stephe: I guess we've all been there. I don't mean to heaven, but can't find the right word. :o) I'm just a simple rhymer but enjoyed your Haiku. Keep sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

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