A Deafeningly Rambunctious Poem

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I feel the need to say a real loud poem, A poem full of WAILS!! HOWLS!! and YELPS!! It doesn’t need to be about anything at all, But if it is then I guess that that helps. AAAARR!! Now that feels better, BOOM!! THRASH!! BAP!! WHAM!! and BAM!!! Just like in the comics of old there’s a VRAP!! SMACK!! ZAP!! Then a CRUNCH!! and a BIFF!! and a SLAM!! Actually, in the comics of old, it was profoundly loud, With all the yelling and fighting. Those words were in yellow, in bright red shiny stars. It was all so thrillingly exciting. With a KABOOM!! and a THUD!! the hero saved the damsel. Then a POP!! and a sudden KABANG!! The hero was muscle bound, long hair and strong jaw. Always one man against a whole gang. Imagine writing poems where words can be invented, Just block letters with two exclamations. BONK!! or WHACK!! followed by WHUMF!! or PHOOMPH!! Even your words are your own creations. Written 19th march 2016 but never for any contest..... Till now :)

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