A Dead Rose

A calm hue shed 
the morning light
into confetti strewn,
across my path snubbed by my eyes
bemusing passers by.

My waking thoughts were doused in you
for heartache plagued this land.
A single rose bestowed on me,
I clenched dead in my hand. 

When morning broke in melody,
I strained to hear its song.
Some countless notes greeted sky's birth
as deaf I walked along. 

If pain consumes the human mind,
God’s light falls on blind eyes,
and heaven’s music all around
falls mute like final breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Palli Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Congrats! So well written, Rhonda.
A   Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Rhonda, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "LAST CALL" if you like. ((( note from MEakaPD Thank you ALL for waiting and chilling, while I sat on the sideline. Since March 1st, I moved to the 4th largest city in the USA (by population.) One of the hardest decisions EVER-EVER!!! I will keep short on my visits until April 1st. After that, there's no holding me back LOL -unless God has other plans. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Callus Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 10:13 AM
I am touched by these sad lines, Rhonda! Pain can make us oblivious to everything else. ~ Congratulations on your win! Hugs // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 2:15 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Rhonda! Heartfelt emotions truly expressed, great work!
A  Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 1:59 AM
Rhonda, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
A   Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 1:28 AM
Rhonda, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog "BE MINDFUL WHEN YOU WRITE" if you'd like or have time. Once again, thank you. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Sirak Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 7:22 AM
This one is bursting with feelings of melancholy, of deep sadness. Well done!
Kendrick Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Great work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit by my page..Sara
Manassian Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 3:57 AM
I agree with Arthur...I'd love to bring the rose back to life. What a stupendous write. So moving, this was, my dear. Loved it...God bless you, sweetie....Yes, we often turn a deaf ear to His voice. Hugs
Vaso Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 12:38 AM
Wow, so beautiful and sad, If I was a magician I would breath life into the rose, and turn black to white!
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