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A Dead Man Can Not Dance

I am long ago gone Deep in the ground Dancing days are long lived memories I never could dance Long ago though I danced a love dance With such a musical embrace I was a taken away to the heavens Love is no more My heart danced out the door Now I rest dead and underneath All the dancing flowers

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Robert Lindley

Date: 6/7/2014 4:35:00 PM

The title got me, the write held me. A very creative piece my friend!!!! Life is truly dead with zero love existing..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/25/2014 8:50:00 AM

I find this to be most interesting. The dancing flowers was a nice touch.

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 5/20/2014 8:46:00 PM

Very creative Arthur...the ending took me by surprise :) Ana

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Ana!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/20/2014 2:31:00 AM

I perceive 2meaning of dances here..:) "I never gonna dance again guilty feelings...." Hahahahah the dancing flowers I seem to see it means two also... :) intriguing and lil short .. :P GBU from olive with a raised eyebrow loool

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:23:00 PM

I love that song "Careless Whisper"

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/19/2014 11:16:00 PM

Interesting. I envision a bunch of daisy's dancing very comically, not that your poem was suppose to evoke humor, but it did, odd.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/19/2014 11:24:00 PM

Well they were roses and daisy's and many others all dancing and laughing on top of me!!!!