A Dead Ant

a dead ant
surrounded by many---
condolence

animalshaiku

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Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/17/2012 11:57:00 AM

Another beautiful one Kash. Ravindra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/20/2012 1:13:00 PM

Great idea..Yes, or morticians arguing on the proper way to bury him or who is going to get the body..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2012 10:37:00 PM

Hey there, Kash, how are you tonight?(or this morning I should say!!!)

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/19/2012 4:14:00 PM

interesting this is Kash, like it. harry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/19/2012 4:52:00 AM

what's your next one, kashi??.. hellllo and huggs! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2012 8:21:00 PM

hey this kind of reminds me of my haiku Fallen Comrades, except that one is a dead leaf!!! ME LIKEY!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/18/2012 7:27:00 PM

ha ha....the true vultures of the land!...great idea, Kash...please come back and visit my dino poem...is it okay?...Allo-gweno-saurus..ha ha

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/18/2012 2:41:00 PM

Condolence ! oh dear. -:(- - oxox Anne-Lise

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/18/2012 2:24:00 PM

Quite an image with few words Kash ;) enjoyed!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2012 1:14:00 PM

and March seems to be ant season round here Kash so very apropos a write luv.. and grand visual vividness too.. luv..

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/18/2012 12:45:00 PM

Amazing!!! Subtle graphics...:) from what I've seen of ants: they were probably saying 'grace' before they carried him off to feed the baby ants...Awsome Haiku...I like it a lot...Big Hugggss~Deb~