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a dead ant

a dead ant surrounded by many--- condolence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/17/2012 11:57:00 AM
Another beautiful one Kash. Ravindra
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Date: 3/20/2012 1:13:00 PM
Great idea..Yes, or morticians arguing on the proper way to bury him or who is going to get the body..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work...Sara
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Date: 3/19/2012 10:37:00 PM
Hey there, Kash, how are you tonight?(or this morning I should say!!!)
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Date: 3/19/2012 4:14:00 PM
interesting this is Kash, like it. harry
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Date: 3/19/2012 4:52:00 AM
what's your next one, kashi??.. hellllo and huggs! :)
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Date: 3/18/2012 8:21:00 PM
hey this kind of reminds me of my haiku Fallen Comrades, except that one is a dead leaf!!! ME LIKEY!!
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Date: 3/18/2012 7:27:00 PM
ha ha....the true vultures of the land!...great idea, Kash...please come back and visit my dino poem...is it okay?...Allo-gweno-saurus..ha ha
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Date: 3/18/2012 2:41:00 PM
Condolence ! oh dear. -:(- - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/18/2012 2:24:00 PM
Quite an image with few words Kash ;) enjoyed!
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Date: 3/18/2012 1:14:00 PM
and March seems to be ant season round here Kash so very apropos a write luv.. and grand visual vividness too.. luv..
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Date: 3/18/2012 12:45:00 PM
Amazing!!! Subtle graphics...:) from what I've seen of ants: they were probably saying 'grace' before they carried him off to feed the baby ants...Awsome Haiku...I like it a lot...Big Hugggss~Deb~
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Date: 3/18/2012 11:40:00 AM
wow
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Date: 3/18/2012 10:55:00 AM
Smile ˜ Is This A Bio? Hahaha ˜ 'Happy Easter' & Poor Little Ant ˜ My Love to You, John!:) *
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Date: 3/18/2012 10:54:00 AM
yeyy, 1st one to visit you.. is the ant having a funeral now??.. sensational! :)
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Date: 3/18/2012 10:52:00 AM
dear me... love the visuals here and the grrreat use of the 'ku form, kashi buddy!... come over!..:) huggs!
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