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A Daydream

He charges my world with his steamy charms; lost in love's lane while in his gentle arms; waves of warmth cocoons me, feeling no harm; I sleep like a baby, not to be waken by morn-alarm... I want to quit candy-dreaming about you, wake me up Sweetie, tell me this is true! You are the twinkling star in my twilight skies; the splatter of sparkles stealing through my eyes. I am lost in this plain, this must be paradise: a world with a man so wonderful and wise. I want to quit candy-dreaming about you, wake me up Sweetie, tell me this is true! I see boundless bloom in your flowery face, you revive my soul with your warm embrace; forever, I want to stay in the perfect place, with faith, I ask God for endless grace. I want to quit candy-dreaming about you, wake me up Sweetie, tell me this is true! I relish tonight your sugar-candy lips; reminiscing the clips of our romantic trips. The steady swirl and twirl at the seashore, like Oliver twist, I desire more, and more... I want to quit candy-dreaming about you, wake me up Sweetie, tell me this is true!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/11/2014 1:25:00 AM
Beautiful write Adeleke worth a great win ! Congrats!
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Date: 8/9/2013 7:39:00 PM
AWESOME.................SKAT
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:44:00 PM
Adeleke, enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... Linda
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:30:00 PM
well done Nate
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Date: 7/26/2013 3:07:00 AM
So glad to see you on the winners list my friend!...Beautiful love poem with a very unique rhyme scheme...Congratulations sir - Tim
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Date: 7/25/2013 9:47:00 PM
Adeleke; Congratulations with your win in Drake's Confessional contest. take care- LINDA
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Date: 7/25/2013 5:59:00 PM
This could be a song, congrats!
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Date: 7/25/2013 3:56:00 PM
congrats on win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/25/2013 2:03:00 PM
Adeleke, good going in the -The Confessional- contest. CONGRATULATIONS:-) Have yourself a great day. >SKAT<
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Date: 7/25/2013 8:05:00 AM
Adeleke, great job on this poem! You won Honorable mention in my "Confessional" contest! There was a ton of playfulness & innocence in this piece. Mixed with this all, though, was simple desire. You harnessed these feelings with depth! Excellent!
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Date: 7/8/2013 8:23:00 AM
A lovely sweet poem, a sweet treat to read:) thankyou. <3 cherie
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Date: 7/6/2013 4:35:00 AM
Cute poem..!! I like it, especially because that "candy-dreaming" phrase.. :D Nicely written..good job. ;)
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