A Daydream

He charges my world with his steamy charms;
lost in love's lane while in his gentle arms;
waves of warmth cocoons me, feeling no harm;
I sleep like a baby, not to be waken by morn-alarm...
I want to quit candy-dreaming about you,
wake me up Sweetie, tell me this is true!

You are the twinkling star in my twilight skies;
the splatter of sparkles stealing through my eyes.
I am lost in this plain, this must be paradise:
a world with a man so wonderful and wise.
I want to quit candy-dreaming about you,
wake me up Sweetie, tell me this is true!

I see boundless bloom in your flowery face,
you revive my soul with your warm embrace;
forever, I want to stay in the perfect place,
with faith, I ask God for endless grace.
I want to quit candy-dreaming about you,
wake me up Sweetie, tell me this is true!


I relish tonight your sugar-candy lips;
reminiscing the clips of our romantic trips.
The steady swirl and twirl at the seashore,
like Oliver twist, I desire more, and more...
I want to quit candy-dreaming about you,
wake me up Sweetie, tell me this is true!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A. Sharma Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 1:25 AM
Beautiful write Adeleke worth a great win ! Congrats!
A  Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 7:39 PM
AWESOME.................SKAT
A   Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 9:44 PM
Adeleke, enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... Linda
D. Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 8:30 PM
well done Nate
Ryerson Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 3:07 AM
So glad to see you on the winners list my friend!...Beautiful love poem with a very unique rhyme scheme...Congratulations sir - Tim
A   Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Adeleke; Congratulations with your win in Drake's Confessional contest. take care- LINDA
Lamoureux Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 5:59 PM
This could be a song, congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 3:56 PM
congrats on win Shadow x smiles
A  Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:03 PM
Adeleke, good going in the -The Confessional- contest. CONGRATULATIONS:-) Have yourself a great day. >SKAT<
Tacito Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 8:05 AM
Adeleke, great job on this poem! You won Honorable mention in my "Confessional" contest! There was a ton of playfulness & innocence in this piece. Mixed with this all, though, was simple desire. You harnessed these feelings with depth! Excellent!
Thomas Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 8:23 AM
A lovely sweet poem, a sweet treat to read:) thankyou. <3 cherie
Candy Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 4:35 AM
Cute poem..!! I like it, especially because that "candy-dreaming" phrase.. :D Nicely written..good job. ;)
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