"a Day With You"

Laying on my bed tonight planning our next time..
Early breakfast for two and then your all mine..
Gazing in your eyes as we sip coffee and taste our meal..
Our feet wrestling under the table as my mind wants to feel...
The check takes forever as our minds blend into one...
I scoop up my keys and in your hand we start to run...
To our paradise we stay as the hours always pass...
Our passion is so strong and our love covers us so fast
I hope you know when your not in my sight my mind plans a day..
Where we can hide for hours and I can whisper what my heart says..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Sweet, lovely, romantic words ..full of tender emotions of passion and excitement .. longing and pleasure .. great imagery Michael.. the lady is lucky in your life.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Neels Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 10:25 PM
Time spent together, so awesomely described :)
Brown Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 10:59 AM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Michael. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
Chachere Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 8:33 PM
so sweet. a blissful day with the one you love so dearly is always and forever a true bliss. ~Lynette
Devonshire Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 6:02 PM
You're such a sweetheart, Michael. I loved reading this romantic rhyme and thinking of you playing footsies under the table. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 5:19 PM
Very nice poem on love and its outcomings
A   Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 4:26 PM
Lovely write, a beautiful day it must be for you both, enjoyed.. smiles:)
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