Theresa Stephens Poet Acrostic

A Day Out

Picnic blanket, breeze caught, and spread out on the grassy                hill.                                                      

Adults only on nostalgia trip roll down bank and spin as a                    top

Rays of sunshine shoot out from the bottom                                         of

Turquoise edged cloud, which hovers over the cliff side                        rocks

Youthful exuberances displayed in kite swirling                                     formation

                                                          

Tasting picked berries and collecting them for later to put them            in

Iced buns and lemonade taken down to the naturist beach                 area

moorings which have boats for hire and voting which one                    of

either group would be the first to strip off au                                        natural

Sun sets on the horizon, deepening to an amber hue in it's final          beauty

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Skat A May 23, 2014 at 9:38 PM Theresa, Nice Acrostic, win...skat Theresa Stephens May 26, 2014 at 2:17 AM Hi, Good of you to read and send your very kind comment. Regards Theresa x

Sara Kendrick May 20, 2014 at 8:56 AM Great way to go with this wiinning work..Congrats..Sara Theresa Stephens May 20, 2014 at 11:51 AM Hi Sara, Thank you for reading and I appreciate your very kind support. All the best, Theresa xx

Richard Lamoureux May 17, 2014 at 1:15 PM Sounds like a lovely day. Congrats on win. Theresa Stephens May 20, 2014 at 11:53 AM Hi, Thank you for reading and for your kind comments. Regards Theresa xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 17, 2014 at 11:11 AM Such a lovely write Theresa ,, brings nature alive ,, a masterpiece ! congrats on a fine win ! Theresa Stephens May 20, 2014 at 12:05 PM Hi Dr. Upma Thank you for taking the time to read and I greatly appreciative and value your very kind support. Regards Theresa xx

Kelly Deschler April 24, 2014 at 12:43 PM Very nice imagery in this poem. It brought back good memories of those warm summer days. You did a really great job on this acrostic, Theresa! ...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and the fav! :) Theresa Stephens April 24, 2014 at 4:23 PM Hi Kelly, You are welcome and, as always, I welcome your most encouraging comments, Thank you Kelly. Regards Theresa xx

Vincent Flannery April 23, 2014 at 2:05 PM Sounds like a great picnic and the perfect day too. Enjoyed your creativeness in writing this piece Theresa. Thank you also for your beautiful comment. Theresa Stephens April 24, 2014 at 4:30 PM Hi, I am grateful for you reading and expressing your most positive comments. I shall look out to reading more of your poems Vincent. All the best Theresa xx

Paul Callus April 22, 2014 at 11:44 AM Top rating for this write Theresa! like the color and movement; apart from the acrostic build. also the rock formation of natural beauty :) // paul [ps...this is a fav :)] Theresa Stephens April 24, 2014 at 4:34 PM Hi Paul, Thank you very much for reading and taking the time to send your very kind and encouraging comments, as always. All the best to you, Theresa xx

Andrea Dietrich April 21, 2014 at 6:09 PM well this day out on the beach poem is a real BEAUTY. You did great with the challenge and really make me want to be part of it. Theresa Stephens April 22, 2014 at 9:49 AM Hi Andrea, Good of you to visit and give your, very welcome, encouraging comments. Glad that you felt inspired. Good luck. Theresa xx

Sara Kendrick April 21, 2014 at 3:49 PM I like your end line statement as an addition to your work..Reads like a wonderful day out..Thanks for the visit to my work..Goobers, ground peas are just common names for peanuts..Sara Theresa Stephens April 22, 2014 at 9:55 AM Hi Sara, Great to receive your lovely comments. Thank you for the info. interesting to read about how other people live. All the best, Theresa xx