A Day Out

All days shaped to it's activities
Bored says the cabin of lodge
Signals wanes no distress call for happiness
Farther amidst green shades hornbills call
And "hey" asuaging the situation Peter utters
"we go for a walk" Astounding to the earing Paul
"The jungle breeds monsters"
Of course these words came from a faint heart
"but we got each others backs"
From the demure Paige, hath her mind on the trip
But all talk shows kept me puzzled
The waning moon already clear to my eyes
"We start a fire, make babecue and share stories"
Saving the day my idea won in the blackout
"AH! what a day out".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 14, 2013 at 3:41 PM
A moving pastoral piece. it jus makes me think of ROBERT FROST. this is amazing. "We start a fire, make babecue and share stories" we shall take Cameroon by storm. Hurray
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July 18, 2013 at 8:01 PM
ah, Yes I like the way you invited my mind on this fun stroll and event. interesting... LOVE ~ LINDA
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