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A Day Out

All days shaped to it's activities Bored says the cabin of lodge Signals wanes no distress call for happiness Farther amidst green shades hornbills call And "hey" asuaging the situation Peter utters "we go for a walk" Astounding to the earing Paul "The jungle breeds monsters" Of course these words came from a faint heart "but we got each others backs" From the demure Paige, hath her mind on the trip But all talk shows kept me puzzled The waning moon already clear to my eyes "We start a fire, make babecue and share stories" Saving the day my idea won in the blackout "AH! what a day out".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/14/2013 3:41:00 PM
A moving pastoral piece. it jus makes me think of ROBERT FROST. this is amazing. "We start a fire, make babecue and share stories" we shall take Cameroon by storm. Hurray
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Date: 7/18/2013 8:01:00 PM
ah, Yes I like the way you invited my mind on this fun stroll and event. interesting... LOVE ~ LINDA
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