A Day Or Two

Your treatment is done
you will soon be home.
Just take it easy now
and be sure to phone.

You have to stay there 
for just a day or two.
And I will miss you
you know that is true.

While I am here
just on my own.
Home just doesn’t
feel like home.

But you will be back
in just a day or two.
Back here for me
to look after you.

So don’t you worry
whatever you do.
And just remember
how much I love you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kitchen Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 2:53 AM
Thanks for the lovely comments Linda-Marie and Andrea, Tim
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 12:03 AM
Nice one for someone you love in treatment. I enjoyed it. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 5:30 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. happy weekend with luv... TIM... awesome write..luv..
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