A Day On the Sea

Soft white clouds growing
Sun falling colder with time
Dark Whispering sea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 10, 2016 at 12:39 AM
awesome poem.. I really like this. LINDA
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April 14, 2014 at 7:26 AM
Enjoyed...especially the Dark Whispering Sea..Thats how I see it sometimes. BG
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April 14, 2014 at 2:36 AM
- A nice day at the sea - enjoy the sunset :) - Well done haiku, Josh ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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