A Day of Thunder

sunray 
no way 

please pray
bad day

oh, dear
why fear?

dark clouds 
enshroud 

under 
thunder 

bull's-eye 
bye-bye 



Date written: 01/13/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Merryman Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 2:28 PM
Great footles, Edward! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Ibeh Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 5:46 PM
Thank you very much, Kim:-)
Kendrick Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 1:43 PM
I have read your winner and was delighted it was on the winners' list. Congrats. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 1:44 PM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Alex Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 6:45 AM
Great Footle. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 7:35 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Christuraj:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 8:27 AM
Excellent footle!
Ibeh Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:26 AM
Thank you so much, Kim:-)
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