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A Day of Thunder

sunray 
no way 

please pray
bad day

oh, dear
why fear?

dark clouds 
enshroud 

under 
thunder 

bull's-eye 
bye-bye 



Date written: 01/13/2022

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Kim Merryman

Date: 1/17/2022 2:28:00 PM

Great footles, Edward! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/17/2022 5:46:00 PM

Thank you very much, Kim:-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2022 1:43:00 PM

I have read your winner and was delighted it was on the winners' list. Congrats. Sara

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/16/2022 1:44:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sara:-)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/16/2022 6:45:00 AM

Great Footle. Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/16/2022 7:35:00 AM

Thank you very much indeed, Christuraj:-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/13/2022 8:27:00 AM

Excellent footle!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/13/2022 10:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, Kim:-)