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A Day In the Life

Dear
John,
Wisdom
encompassed
your humble nature
Dreams and visions proved immortal
Songs of imagined peace play in fields of strawberries

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Sean Kelly

Date: 5/16/2010 9:43:00 AM

Write onnnnnn , JH . post ..

Brian Strand

Date: 5/22/2009 12:50:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest John.Rgds Brian

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/3/2009 8:04:00 AM

Great...yet peace needs to exist or reborn in Jeusalem's fields when hatred is pronounce mortal. More poetry please. All the best.

Katherine Stella

Date: 3/28/2009 9:15:00 AM

and strwberry fields forever shall be remembered truely a great write John for Johm nice tribute thanks my friend for sharing keep up the great work hope all is well in the big city

Jane Bowen

Date: 3/23/2009 6:44:00 AM

Fibonacci...Nice form to choose...I liked the Dear John....it's a nice touch~ Songs of imagined peace....That part is exceptional darling friend~ Imagine if we only had peace? How yummy those fields must have smelled~ Take care my friend at the soupie...Jane

David Smalling

Date: 3/16/2009 10:36:00 AM

I am so happy to have you congratulate me, and look at the genius you have to write such specials poem, it make me feel important. I am new and treat this as a special moment. God bless you

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/15/2009 5:32:00 PM

Love this John, I picture him now in fields of strawberries. I so loved his music. BG

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 3/15/2009 12:38:00 PM

You write so beautifully John, it's always a pleasure to read your poetry. Truely, Trudy

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/14/2009 8:24:00 PM

This is beautifully written. Gripping and so Spiritual. I have never seen this form so thank you for introducing me. I look forward to learning more. Smiles from Lolita

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/14/2009 1:48:00 PM

Fab words here. he would be proud, I'm sure. perfect words. Hope you're well and not workin too hard! :) Love, Kristin

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 3/14/2009 12:43:00 PM

such wonderful words.....nicely written....really enjoyed this.....peace Maryam*

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/14/2009 11:02:00 AM

Hi John - as always wonderful poetry - I reckon being wise, humble and at peace are all things to treasure in this life - As always i love your poetry - I have never used this form I reckon I'll give it a go soon - God Bless you always, MJ

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/14/2009 11:01:00 AM

very nicely penned Joh you have yet to disappoint Kudos

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/14/2009 10:30:00 AM

John, all of your poems reflect the qualities you describe in the creative poem. "Songs of imagined peace" is a good way to describe poetry. Very nice! Love, Carolyn

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