A Day In the Life

Dear
John,
Wisdom
encompassed
your humble nature
Dreams and visions proved immortal
Songs of imagined peace play in fields of strawberries
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kelly Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 9:43 AM
Write onnnnnn , JH . post ..
Strand Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 12:50 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest John.Rgds Brian
Shahwan Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 8:04 AM
Great...yet peace needs to exist or reborn in Jeusalem's fields when hatred is pronounce mortal. More poetry please. All the best.
Stella Avatar
March 28, 2009 at 9:15 AM
and strwberry fields forever shall be remembered truely a great write John for Johm nice tribute thanks my friend for sharing keep up the great work hope all is well in the big city
Bowen Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 6:44 AM
Fibonacci...Nice form to choose...I liked the Dear John....it's a nice touch~ Songs of imagined peace....That part is exceptional darling friend~ Imagine if we only had peace? How yummy those fields must have smelled~ Take care my friend at the soupie...Jane
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March 16, 2009 at 10:36 AM
I am so happy to have you congratulate me, and look at the genius you have to write such specials poem, it make me feel important. I am new and treat this as a special moment. God bless you
Gorelick Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 5:32 PM
Love this John, I picture him now in fields of strawberries. I so loved his music. BG
Rider Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 12:38 PM
You write so beautifully John, it's always a pleasure to read your poetry. Truely, Trudy
Townsend Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 8:24 PM
This is beautifully written. Gripping and so Spiritual. I have never seen this form so thank you for introducing me. I look forward to learning more. Smiles from Lolita
Reynolds Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 1:48 PM
Fab words here. he would be proud, I'm sure. perfect words. Hope you're well and not workin too hard! :) Love, Kristin
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March 14, 2009 at 12:43 PM
such wonderful words.....nicely written....really enjoyed this.....peace Maryam*
Jordan Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 11:02 AM
Hi John - as always wonderful poetry - I reckon being wise, humble and at peace are all things to treasure in this life - As always i love your poetry - I have never used this form I reckon I'll give it a go soon - God Bless you always, MJ
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March 14, 2009 at 11:01 AM
very nicely penned Joh you have yet to disappoint Kudos
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March 14, 2009 at 10:30 AM
John, all of your poems reflect the qualities you describe in the creative poem. "Songs of imagined peace" is a good way to describe poetry. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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