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A Day In the Dahlias

Orange sunshine, pink butterflies, in dawn buds of hope-
Last night's rain has caused noon blooms in the fields!
Canaries are flying low in a season of scents and scenery;
And the moments are creeping, in response to sultry heat. 
A day among varicolored dahlias, at the premiere of life,
As bees are buzzing for honey, at summertime's midlife.
Tall trees cast shimmering shade, all the green afternoon,
Amid life's colorful, lovely, eclectic sights and sounds.
Until delight and fragrance greet dreamy evening eyes,
And deep burgundy sunshine leaves with the butterflies!


Written on 7/7/2021
For: A Brian Strand July 8 Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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July 9, 2021 at 10:37 AM
Hi Evelyn, I see; congrats are in order. You penned such an upbeat, positive write with stunning imagery. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 10:48 AM
Hi Alexis, Thank you very much for your heartwarming comments and congratulations. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write and garden you have here. I wish, I am in your pretty picture. Enjoy your win with blessings...................
Buehler Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 10:52 AM
I thank you sincerely for those fine compliments, Paula. Have a wonderful day, my friend. :)
Gaul Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 6:43 AM
Well crafted, colorful imagery with an intense closing line. Well done indeed.
Buehler Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 10:55 AM
Thank you for your warm appreciation, my friend. :)
Strand Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 12:37 AM
Evelyn,my prize winner+ in contest 1006
Buehler Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 10:57 AM
Thank you so much for the honor, Brian. :)
Alex Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful Creations. Congratulations!
Buehler Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 10:57 AM
Thank you very much. :)
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 5:41 AM
Great imagery, everyline of this poem is beautiful as if a painter carefully chooses colours and paints his picture. I like the way you describe things. Amazing talent. All the best for contest
Buehler Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Thank you for the words of delight, Rama. Sometimes we need to really take a good look, to notice the beauty all around us. So glad you enjoyed. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 11:02 PM
Lovely picture but a lovelier poem. You could almost paint it. You at best with nature poems. Hugs
Buehler Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Your words bring good cheer, Victor. You have my heartfelt thanks. Hugs. :)
Laurie Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 9:46 PM
Hello Evelyn … flowers produce rainbows of colour and emit perfume so all our natures friends can become our showpiece - lovely verse Evelyn - Lindsay
Buehler Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 9:55 PM
Hello Laurie...I am delighted with your poetic comment and appreciation. Thank you very much. :) Evelyn
Wolf Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 9:00 PM
Simply dazzling! A marvelous treat for the reader's senses, Evelyn. ~ Brilliance and Bedazzlement, gw
Buehler Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 10:00 PM
I am thrilled that you're dazzled, Gershon. Thank you for the super comment. Flower Power :D
Hankins Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 6:28 PM
Lovely poem reminding me of my mom's dahlias when I was a child. Oh, how she loved them.
Buehler Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 8:27 PM
I can certainly see why. I am glad this poem brings back such good memories for you, Milton. Thank you for the compliment. Have a nice evening. :)
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