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A Day In a Life When Once I Was a Soldier Was

A day in a life When once a soldier was i Happiness was to survive the night till blight of breaking dawn Shivering garnering heat from my only daily teppid cup of muddy coffee Chewing on a crust of stale bread Where entertainment and enjoyment came and was to be found in the form of drawing a lasting puff on a cigarette and blowing circles into the air But most of all what got one through bye and past the drudgery Was the tasteless caustic raucous gallows sense of humour meeted out by one's comrades Whilst patiently awaiting for one's number to be called or up signaling your time has come , the end is nigh Until thee has smoked thy final cigarette and coffee cup is passed onto another as is a rationed crust of bread One day i was a soldier The following day stone dead A soldier was i no more Entombed under geavestone over head

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Date: 11/25/2020 9:56:00 AM
Great epitaph that last verse Christopher worthy of any soldiers grave, black adder goes forth, was not a parody, the gallows humor was closer to the truth than we’ll ever know cheers David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/27/2020 12:47:00 PM
Could not agree more David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/26/2020 12:41:00 PM
Black adder is an authority on WW1 the madness insanity pointlessness, the most honest black comedy ever.
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/26/2020 11:14:00 AM
Cheers Ta thanks David Black Adder goes Forth is trully the benchmark maybe even more so than any poetic dissertation
Date: 11/24/2020 5:18:00 PM
Ah, yes Christopher. So real! Amazing pen.
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/26/2020 11:10:00 AM
Thanking you Caren for your Amazing comments

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