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A Day At the Pier

Seagulls gliding o'er the pier, Their raucous cries caught in the wind. They duck and dive without fear, To snatch a fish as they descend, While anglers to their lines attend. The pungent essence of the sea, Inundates the atmosphere, And sand kicked up by briny breeze, Stings and causes eyes to tear, But sun is shining and sky is clear. A pelican roosts on a wooden post, Napping lazily in the sun, While children collect shells and boast, Of which of them found the prettiest one. A perfect day for having fun. 4/7/21

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Date: 4/11/2021 11:53:00 AM
This is a true delight to read Kim. I live beside the sea and love to stroll along the promenade each day to our beautiful victorian pier and you have captured the scene so well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/17/2021 3:56:00 PM
Thank you, Ann!
Date: 4/10/2021 10:53:00 AM
Love this Kim. Your images evoke so many memories. I can see and feel it.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/17/2021 3:56:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 4/8/2021 3:41:00 AM
Beautiful relaxing imagery Kim, there's no other relaxing place id rather be. Tom
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/17/2021 3:56:00 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 4/7/2021 9:31:00 PM
Oh! Kim! I can smell the salty air!! Well done!! Sounds like it’s time for a beach trip!! Lol!! Big huggs and love!! Deb
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/17/2021 3:55:00 PM
Thank you, Deborah!
Date: 4/7/2021 8:53:00 PM
Delightful, Kim ~
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/17/2021 3:55:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 4/7/2021 7:49:00 PM
I'm with Judy below. Your words captured the scene sublimely and swept me off my landlubber feet right down to the water's edge. FAVE time, Kim. Thanks, gw
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/17/2021 3:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 4/7/2021 7:42:00 PM
This made me feel like I was on the beach walking along the shore. A lovely write. God Bless, JB
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/17/2021 3:54:00 PM
Thank you, Judy!
Date: 4/7/2021 7:34:00 PM
There will be more of those kinds of days once summer is here. Great write that appears to be describing a day at the New Jersey shore.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/17/2021 3:54:00 PM
Thank you, Robert! Actually I'm in NW Florida.
Date: 4/7/2021 7:13:00 PM
This is such an exquisite composition. I love the ambience of the sea and the creatures you vividly painted. A lovely treat! Blessings.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/17/2021 3:53:00 PM
Thank you, JCB!

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