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A Day At the Forest

In the misty morning amid the elm and maple trees The whiteness delicately floats above the ponds waterline The night hunters abandon their night search for food As the early morning rays peek through the woodland. The morning brings the forest teeming to life The occupants ready to attack their early morning feast The vines and shrubs hiding them as they arch ready to attack they scramble for their scrumpcious bite of food. The geese, crows and magpies mingle around the water's edge Looking for plants, seeds and aquatic animals to feed Among the bull rushes and cattails on the sloughs edge They mingle with the locals who come to drink. Eating the wild berries for a tasty treat Saskatoon, chokecherries, pin cherries ready to eat Juicy and sweet, mild yet tart Quite edible for a flock to feast. This is a haven, a sanctuary for all And as the balmy summer evening turns once again to dusk The predators will come out with the evening shade To stalk their prey among the woodland grove.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/24/2013 10:30:00 PM
Seeing another of your oldies again. You sure do know your forest creatures, Phyllis!! I enjoyed your good grief story.
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Date: 8/28/2010 8:10:00 PM
An interesting depiction of the wildlife both morning and night. I liked your descriptions. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/28/2010 7:01:00 PM
Very creative and interesting write well worded and expressed, Phyllis
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:25:00 PM
Immensely beautiful lines Phyllis and enjoyed your spin on Fall.. if for the contest.. good luck my friend.. my entry is "Fascinating Fall" .. such lovely works of expression...
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:24:00 PM
Reads like a beautiful place filled with nature and animals..Very descriptive and expressive...Sara
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Date: 8/28/2010 3:31:00 PM
this poem is so nartureous, i like it and i love nature, u have a quite excellent talent in descriptions which is something i lack, ur vocabulary is high and various, wish u the best of life and the succeed of ur poems love louzana
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Date: 8/28/2010 3:29:00 PM
Smile ~ Sounds kind of vicious; especially for those little fishies in the pond ~ Smile ~ How are "You My Dear, 'Lovely & Precious Phyllis Babcock;" well I hope!! ~ This is a very colourful, pleasant & image filled write; flowing perfectly through & through; "Lovely" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You & Your Dear, Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Evening Dear Phyllis Babcock, Amid The Forest of Dreams & The Foliage of Love;" Bye Dear!:) ~
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