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A Dawn Arrives Bearing Message of Heart

A dawn arrives bearing message of heart And pleads with the sun to disperse the fog And engages the sky to paint its horizon In orange and pink with shades of crimson Not much time it has to say what it wants Before it must leave and pass the baton, Regret's written in the missive morn carries: Patient he must be to realize his dream Confused is he for the words don't match The celebration he sees in beaming skyline Evoked by the goodbye of parting aurora Encoding her passions on rising golden arc Meet him she will but not till the evening Not till the sunset elaborates her theme Painting on blue tapestry lavender imprints As she readies to decode what romance is June 7, 2019 HM: Strand choice R contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 1/25/2022 5:01:00 AM

As your pen moves on paper, you script tales of fervent romance ! The parting aurora and the rising golden arc.... what a lovely combination!

Brenda Chiri

Date: 3/27/2020 12:20:00 PM

Vijay congrats on your placement!;)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/27/2019 4:26:00 PM

Lovely Vijay. I love to stop by your page once in awhile to read one of your poems. They are always striking.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/25/2019 11:26:00 AM

Hello Victor! Mia Cara~ Very romantic and how I admire your combinations of imagery, feelings and the universe. I hope you realize what a master you are! Hugs, Panagiota

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2019 3:48:00 PM

Much appreciate Panagiota..many thanks.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 6/21/2019 3:32:00 AM

Romantic in high level, a mix of sacred things... nature and cosmic thoughts... Imagery that make us dream,,, life is a dream... salute alkas

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2019 3:48:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/13/2019 3:11:00 AM

Your poetry, dear Vijay, a dawn always bearing a message of Beauty! With each work of art you touch hearts and shake minds.. In both ways, Your muse seeking you, or You invoking your muse ; the magic of your poetry is enthralling! the beauty is unstained! I have missed reading your gems.. I fave your wonderful poem for other reads.. my deepest regards. Stay always blessed.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/14/2019 7:27:00 AM

I always appreciate your visit and comments, Besma. You are always so very kind. Many thanks. And special thanks for the FAV.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/12/2019 8:34:00 AM

This lovely poem vividly conveys its theme of romance--of which the speaker is not completely confident. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/12/2019 3:46:00 PM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/9/2019 8:38:00 PM

so beautiful and touching.. hugs eve

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2019 8:24:00 AM

Much appreciate Eve..many thanks for your visit and comments.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/9/2019 10:13:00 AM

You are a true romantic my friend and your poems are all truly imaginative - a very creative write - love the line Patient he must be to realize his dream - patience pays in the end. wonderfully penned Vijay. Hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2019 8:24:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments my friend--many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/9/2019 4:23:00 AM

There is stunning imagery in this colorful poem Vijay. My favorite lines..."Not till the sunset elaborates her theme Painting on blue tapestry lavender imprints". I can envision the serenity. : ) xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/9/2019 8:39:00 AM

Thank you for the wonderful feedback Connie..much appreciate, as always.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 6/8/2019 7:43:00 PM

colorful and very well written Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/9/2019 8:39:00 AM

Much appreciate Allen..many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2019 10:05:00 AM

colorful and romantic imagery, Vijay. Very nice.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/9/2019 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/8/2019 8:13:00 AM

Romantic hues! Great message!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/9/2019 8:38:00 AM

Much appreciate Kim--many thanks.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/8/2019 3:25:00 AM

More than well penned. At a loss for words. Panagiota

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2019 7:54:00 AM

So kind of you, Panagiota...always happy to read your feedback..many thanks.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 6/8/2019 1:12:00 AM

Very visual, very poetic, as always. Nice write, my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2019 7:54:00 AM

Hope you are doing well my friend..haven't seen your poems in a while. Much appreciate your feedback, as always..many thanks.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/7/2019 9:41:00 PM

Your poem is simply stunning in the beauty of the emotive and evocative images you so tenderly and artistically convey. Superb poetry, Vijay. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2019 7:53:00 AM

You are very kind my friend..much appreciate your visit and comments, Susan..many thanks.

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/7/2019 7:59:00 PM

I like the imagery you have beautifully arranged for eyes to touch what you have portrayed Vijay, if they'd been a contest, 1st Place and nothing less, Aloha William

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2019 7:51:00 AM

You are so very kind my friend..much appreciate your remarks, William..many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/7/2019 4:44:00 PM

Wow, very nice Vijay. I love it :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2019 7:50:00 AM

Much appreciate Heidi--many thanks for the kind feedback.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/7/2019 4:35:00 PM

Amazing poetry, love this.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2019 7:50:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and comments, Harry--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/7/2019 3:53:00 PM

"Patient he must be to realize his dream" Good things come to those who wait. Sometimes moments are tangled, emotions become stirred. "Encoding her passions on rising golden arc, to decode what romance is" The end will be an ever after. :) I am just guessing. This is beautiful and tender. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2019 7:49:00 AM

Your analysis is always on point--much appreciate the kind remarks, Brandy..many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2019 3:47:00 PM

- A wonderfully romantic poems, Vijay ... love the last verse ... "Painting on blue tapestry lavender imprints As she readies to decode what romance is "... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2019 7:47:00 AM

So glad you liked the verse, Anne-Lise...always happy to read your feedback..much appreciate..many thanks.