Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

A Dawn Arrives Bearing Message of Heart

A dawn arrives bearing message of heart
And pleads with the sun to disperse the fog
And engages the sky to paint its horizon
In orange and pink with shades of crimson

Not much time it has to say what it wants
Before it must leave and pass the baton,
Regret's written in the missive morn carries:
Patient he must be to realize his dream

Confused is he for the words don't match
The celebration he sees in beaming skyline
Evoked by the goodbye of parting aurora
Encoding her passions on rising golden arc

Meet him she will but not till the evening
Not till the sunset elaborates her theme
Painting on blue tapestry lavender imprints
As she readies to decode what romance is

June 7, 2019
HM: Strand choice R contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George January 25, 2022 at 5:01 AM As your pen moves on paper, you script tales of fervent romance ! The parting aurora and the rising golden arc.... what a lovely combination!

Brenda Chiri March 27, 2020 at 12:20 PM Vijay congrats on your placement!;)

Jeanne Mcgee June 27, 2019 at 4:26 PM Lovely Vijay. I love to stop by your page once in awhile to read one of your poems. They are always striking.

Panagiota Romios June 25, 2019 at 11:26 AM Hello Victor! Mia Cara~ Very romantic and how I admire your combinations of imagery, feelings and the universe. I hope you realize what a master you are! Hugs, Panagiota Vijay Pandit June 27, 2019 at 3:48 PM Much appreciate Panagiota..many thanks.

Alkas Poetry June 21, 2019 at 3:32 AM Romantic in high level, a mix of sacred things... nature and cosmic thoughts... Imagery that make us dream,,, life is a dream... salute alkas Vijay Pandit June 27, 2019 at 3:48 PM Much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri June 13, 2019 at 3:11 AM Your poetry, dear Vijay, a dawn always bearing a message of Beauty! With each work of art you touch hearts and shake minds.. In both ways, Your muse seeking you, or You invoking your muse ; the magic of your poetry is enthralling! the beauty is unstained! I have missed reading your gems.. I fave your wonderful poem for other reads.. my deepest regards. Stay always blessed. Vijay Pandit June 14, 2019 at 7:27 AM I always appreciate your visit and comments, Besma. You are always so very kind. Many thanks. And special thanks for the FAV.

Janice Canerdy June 12, 2019 at 8:34 AM This lovely poem vividly conveys its theme of romance--of which the speaker is not completely confident. Janice Vijay Pandit June 12, 2019 at 3:46 PM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Eve Roper June 9, 2019 at 8:38 PM so beautiful and touching.. hugs eve Vijay Pandit June 10, 2019 at 8:24 AM Much appreciate Eve..many thanks for your visit and comments.

Jennifer Proxenos June 9, 2019 at 10:13 AM You are a true romantic my friend and your poems are all truly imaginative - a very creative write - love the line Patient he must be to realize his dream - patience pays in the end. wonderfully penned Vijay. Hugs, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit June 10, 2019 at 8:24 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments my friend--many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong June 9, 2019 at 4:23 AM There is stunning imagery in this colorful poem Vijay. My favorite lines..."Not till the sunset elaborates her theme Painting on blue tapestry lavender imprints". I can envision the serenity. : ) xxoo Vijay Pandit June 9, 2019 at 8:39 AM Thank you for the wonderful feedback Connie..much appreciate, as always.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. June 8, 2019 at 7:43 PM colorful and very well written Vijay Vijay Pandit June 9, 2019 at 8:39 AM Much appreciate Allen..many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2019 at 10:05 AM colorful and romantic imagery, Vijay. Very nice. Vijay Pandit June 9, 2019 at 8:38 AM Thank you Andrea..much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2019 at 8:13 AM Romantic hues! Great message! Vijay Pandit June 9, 2019 at 8:38 AM Much appreciate Kim--many thanks.

Panagiota Romios June 8, 2019 at 3:25 AM More than well penned. At a loss for words. Panagiota Vijay Pandit June 8, 2019 at 7:54 AM So kind of you, Panagiota...always happy to read your feedback..many thanks.

Lawrence Sharp June 8, 2019 at 1:12 AM Very visual, very poetic, as always. Nice write, my friend. Vijay Pandit June 8, 2019 at 7:54 AM Hope you are doing well my friend..haven't seen your poems in a while. Much appreciate your feedback, as always..many thanks.

Susan Ashley June 7, 2019 at 9:41 PM Your poem is simply stunning in the beauty of the emotive and evocative images you so tenderly and artistically convey. Superb poetry, Vijay. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan Vijay Pandit June 8, 2019 at 7:53 AM You are very kind my friend..much appreciate your visit and comments, Susan..many thanks.

William Kelii Kekaula June 7, 2019 at 7:59 PM I like the imagery you have beautifully arranged for eyes to touch what you have portrayed Vijay, if they'd been a contest, 1st Place and nothing less, Aloha William Vijay Pandit June 8, 2019 at 7:51 AM You are so very kind my friend..much appreciate your remarks, William..many thanks.

Heidi Sands June 7, 2019 at 4:44 PM Wow, very nice Vijay. I love it :) Vijay Pandit June 8, 2019 at 7:50 AM Much appreciate Heidi--many thanks for the kind feedback.

Harry Horsman June 7, 2019 at 4:35 PM Amazing poetry, love this. Vijay Pandit June 8, 2019 at 7:50 AM Thank you for your visit and comments, Harry--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole June 7, 2019 at 3:53 PM "Patient he must be to realize his dream" Good things come to those who wait. Sometimes moments are tangled, emotions become stirred. "Encoding her passions on rising golden arc, to decode what romance is" The end will be an ever after. :) I am just guessing. This is beautiful and tender. ~ Brandy Vijay Pandit June 8, 2019 at 7:49 AM Your analysis is always on point--much appreciate the kind remarks, Brandy..many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2019 at 3:47 PM - A wonderfully romantic poems, Vijay ... love the last verse ... "Painting on blue tapestry lavender imprints As she readies to decode what romance is "... - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit June 8, 2019 at 7:47 AM So glad you liked the verse, Anne-Lise...always happy to read your feedback..much appreciate..many thanks.