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A Dawn - Come Too Late - for Trashed no 2

A Dawn – Come Too Late For we sometimes catch death – unaware in our haste to live life on the edge shout the dead words – who will care if I fail to honor life’s pledge bypass death on my way to the ledge. For they feel not what I feel entrusting my fate to the wind touching a moment surreal reaching to touch death’s – dead end embracing his cape as a friend. So do these moments encroach sweeping across the pains face evil’s attempt to quick poach those who succumb to such fate in the darkness – a dawn – come too late. 8/29/2015 - posted 8/29/2015 John G. Lawless Trashed @2 contest -- sponsor -- Broken Wings

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Date: 10/28/2018 5:35:00 PM
"Quick poach" Nice work
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Date: 10/21/2018 10:14:00 PM
xcellent poem
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Date: 10/14/2015 10:07:00 PM
John, Congrats on your trashed #2 win. SKAT <3
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Date: 10/12/2015 3:16:00 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win John! Wonder why such a beautiful poem got trashed in any contest?
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Date: 10/11/2015 10:25:00 PM
Congrats John on this poem winning in this contest. I love dark poems and the imagination it takes to create them.
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Date: 10/11/2015 3:11:00 PM
Powerful, deep and dark, John. Congratulations on your well-deserved win this time. Sandra
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Date: 10/11/2015 3:01:00 PM
a deep dark write John which grabbed my attention from start to end - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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