A David For David

ziggy stardust struts- -
david bowie peers out
at the audience

written for Cyndi’s contest, with my very best wishes for David and Geraldine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/19/2013 6:10:00 PM
lol, fun haiku, very unusual use but quite fitting, enjoyed it Jack!
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Date: 11/21/2012 9:28:00 PM
Jack,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 11/15/2012 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "David's for David" contest Jack. Love, Carol ~David~ is sure to love every one of the poems written.
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Date: 11/13/2012 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win my dear friend Jack! A lovely dedication indeed! Always thank you for stopping by and your nice comments/congratulatory on my work. love/hugs, LG
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Date: 11/13/2012 12:53:00 AM
Congratulations on another win Jack, well done love it xx ps I am the lumber so I got on okay with me thanks xx
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Date: 11/12/2012 4:03:00 PM
Jack. love the dedication for David.. take care~ PD
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Date: 11/12/2012 3:47:00 PM
Wonderful... congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 11/12/2012 10:37:00 AM
nice on Jack, happy to see you back again xx
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Date: 11/11/2012 3:46:00 PM
Daver, how could you not know! NEAW NEAW NEAW NEAW* Jack, good luck with your haiku~SKAT~
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Date: 11/11/2012 11:07:00 AM
I don't know who David Bowie is, but I sure do like your Haiku - allows me to create my own image. Love, daver
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Date: 11/11/2012 10:27:00 AM
gosh, now here is one I missed. You are at it again. Making a poem of few words but doing it SO WELL.
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Date: 11/11/2012 10:27:00 AM
DAvid Bowie was a great choice of Davids, BTW
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Date: 11/11/2012 7:33:00 AM
Very good approach here Jack.Best wishes to you.
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Date: 11/10/2012 11:20:00 PM
bowie at his best jack luv .. his makeup as ziggy was so cool .. good luck with this exciting entry for david in cyndi's tribute contest .. up with wee one as he is a little night owl like gran and gramps ..haha
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Date: 11/10/2012 4:01:00 PM
I seen David Boowie at the Sky Dome, he put on quite a show. good luck with the contest.
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Date: 11/10/2012 3:58:00 PM
Jack, nice to see you here.. I'm wondering what happen to David W., I love this haiku... and David B., nice choice... xox~pd
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Date: 11/10/2012 3:52:00 PM
Jack, well done - Luck in contest!!! Wishing you a pleasant weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/10/2012 3:50:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Great work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 11/10/2012 3:20:00 PM
Wonderful Jack, best of luck with this poem. Love Constance
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