A David For David

ziggy stardust struts- -
david bowie peers out
at the audience

written for Cyndi’s contest, with my very best wishes for David and Geraldine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Harper Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 6:10 PM
lol, fun haiku, very unusual use but quite fitting, enjoyed it Jack!
A   Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 9:28 PM
Jack,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
Brown Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 11:25 AM
Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "David's for David" contest Jack. Love, Carol ~David~ is sure to love every one of the poems written.
Gasun Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on your super win my dear friend Jack! A lovely dedication indeed! Always thank you for stopping by and your nice comments/congratulatory on my work. love/hugs, LG
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 12:53 AM
Congratulations on another win Jack, well done love it xx ps I am the lumber so I got on okay with me thanks xx
A   Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 4:03 PM
Jack. love the dedication for David.. take care~ PD
O'Leary Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 3:47 PM
Wonderful... congratulations on your win... Terry
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 10:37 AM
nice on Jack, happy to see you back again xx
A  Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 3:46 PM
Daver, how could you not know! NEAW NEAW NEAW NEAW* Jack, good luck with your haiku~SKAT~
Austin Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 11:07 AM
I don't know who David Bowie is, but I sure do like your Haiku - allows me to create my own image. Love, daver
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 10:27 AM
gosh, now here is one I missed. You are at it again. Making a poem of few words but doing it SO WELL.
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 10:27 AM
DAvid Bowie was a great choice of Davids, BTW
Poet Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 7:33 AM
Very good approach here Jack.Best wishes to you.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 10, 2012 at 11:20 PM
bowie at his best jack luv .. his makeup as ziggy was so cool .. good luck with this exciting entry for david in cyndi's tribute contest .. up with wee one as he is a little night owl like gran and gramps ..haha
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November 10, 2012 at 4:01 PM
I seen David Boowie at the Sky Dome, he put on quite a show. good luck with the contest.
A   Avatar
November 10, 2012 at 3:58 PM
Jack, nice to see you here.. I'm wondering what happen to David W., I love this haiku... and David B., nice choice... xox~pd
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2012 at 3:52 PM
Jack, well done - Luck in contest!!! Wishing you a pleasant weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 10, 2012 at 3:50 PM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Great work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
La France Avatar
November 10, 2012 at 3:20 PM
Wonderful Jack, best of luck with this poem. Love Constance
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