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A David For David

He drifts among fireflies and splits the rain A haze walking through Great Wall’s domain, Twists of Copperfield’s runes whirls a relay Under kliegs of stars, mind’s eye becomes prey. Sweet alchemy washes real world’s strains Where human life transcends the bleak of pain, On enchanted tours, he eludes flames’ slay Stuffing dreams with awe like quick pirouettes He drifts among fireflies. Like our David whose challenges reclaim True firmness blazing amidst night’s restraints, His magic of hope strengthens with love’s gains Miracles nourish through divine stream’s ray With spirit lit by heaven’s grace, time obeys He drifts among fireflies. Dear David, may you continue to believe in the magic of fulfilled wishes and endless love ------------ *David Copperfield—renowned illusionist and magician Cyndi MacMillan’s Contest: Davids for David By nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/24/2012 8:06:00 PM
Nette,, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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Date: 11/15/2012 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "David's for David" contest Nette. Love, Carol ~David~ is sure to love every one of the poems written.
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Date: 11/13/2012 9:07:00 AM
This is indeed a great write and dedication my dear friend, Nette! Congratulations on your well-deserved "super win"! love/hugs, LG
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Date: 11/13/2012 12:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Nette, well done xx
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Date: 11/12/2012 4:01:00 PM
Nette. love the dedication for David.. take care~ PD
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Date: 11/12/2012 3:53:00 PM
Very nice, Nette... Congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 11/12/2012 3:14:00 PM
Wonderful dedication,Nice presentation,Nette...Congratulations on your win....I love this...
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Date: 11/1/2012 1:37:00 PM
I thought you were gone on vacation Nette. A very good poem .... a winning poem!! Best of luck! Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2012 10:31:00 AM
here you go again, with poetry that leaves one in awe of your talent dear lady.. need i say more.....magic is a wonderful word for you my dear...........
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Date: 11/1/2012 10:25:00 AM
This is a truly brilliant write by you Nette! I really enjoyed this incredibly awesome and fully delightful poem that you have written here my good friend! David will surely love this poem dedicated to him! I enjoyed that you chose the illusionist David Copperfield as your David, I should have guessed you would choose such a mystical character to write from! I had a wonderful and a fiercely fearful night last night, Halloween! I was a demon, my wife was Death! It was a lot of fun! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/1/2012 8:33:00 AM
Ahh! I am sure that David will enjoy this one..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stoppign by ..I hope all is well with you and yours..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2012 7:58:00 AM
What a great write. I enjoyed reading your work.
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Date: 11/1/2012 7:25:00 AM
Wow...Great dedication by you here Nette!Cyndi is going to love it!
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Date: 11/1/2012 6:06:00 AM
‡ Magiclal The Moments Aneath Glitterings Near Yet Faraway Stars, Sweet Beautiful Amazing Nette. Beauty. Since It Seems To Be The Wonderful Forefront Amid, This Moments Thought ? Is Has Been And Shall Be, The Inspiration In Muse Time And Time Again For Oceans Of Beautiful Love Songs Brushed By Poetry's Bards. Your Own Beauty I Am Quite Certain Has Been The Inspiration As The Muse, Guiding Countless Pens Quills And Brushes Swirling About, In Loves Hues. Beautiful, Just Like You. My Love, Rachel *
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