A Daughter At Her Mother's Shrine

Dear Mother, for a while now you’ve been gone.
Has time for you seemed long beyond the veil?
For those you left, time painfully goes on.
Oh, Mother, can you hear me where you dwell?

I wish to hear your voice again. How sweet
The sound of it each day when we awoke.
Its dulcet tone each afternoon would greet
us after school. How kind the words you spoke!

Your words would flutter like wings of a dove
When each of us received your goodnight kiss,
And gazing at our dad, your one true love,
Your words, unsaid, shone in those eyes I miss.

Your flowers’ scent I breathe in tenderly
while praying that your words drift down to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/19/2020 10:32:00 PM
A heartfelt tribute to one's departed mother (though I know yours is still around!) A very belated congrats for the contest you won with this!
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Date: 6/8/2014 11:23:00 PM
Andrea What a touching, emotional, heart felt and caring tribute. Thank you for the wonderful comment on my My Way poem.
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:58:00 PM
Words that touch the heart and soul. Excellent write and win! Hugs
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Date: 11/18/2013 10:14:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea...angelic...
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Date: 11/18/2013 8:44:00 PM
Way to go on the contest. A beautiful story.
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Date: 11/18/2013 5:01:00 PM
Congrats on your super win in this contest,Andrea...Lovely write...Great poet...
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Date: 11/18/2013 12:33:00 PM
a very touching poem Andrea....congrats on your win
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Date: 11/18/2013 10:06:00 AM
The heart of this poem is what is everlasting. Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 11/17/2013 9:05:00 PM
I like the way you put a quote at the top. Heartfelt poem. Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 11/17/2013 8:15:00 PM
Congratulations on the fine win, Andrea
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Date: 11/17/2013 7:14:00 PM
such a poignant write, this one tugs at the heartstrings....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/17/2013 6:45:00 PM
a tearjerker here, andrea, poignant but lovely all the same...congrats on your top spot win! and thank you so much for my win in YOUR contest! :)
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Date: 11/17/2013 6:29:00 PM
Andrea, thats a great poem. The title "A daughter at her mother's Shrine" is an impressive one, an intelligent thought.The whole poem touches one's soul. Congrats on a great win. (: ) Jenish.
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Date: 11/17/2013 5:33:00 PM
Andrea, what a honor to read this poem and to know, if even at a distance, one who wins in so many more ways than just this.
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Date: 11/17/2013 5:06:00 PM
Congrats. Andrea.....Another win for you...For me another HM...I am going for the record..Take care Rick
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Date: 11/17/2013 3:36:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for the fine win..... Sending hugs: -) Thank you for the support. always~ LINDA
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Date: 11/21/2012 8:17:00 AM
does not get better than this, Andrea, wow you are so special...
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Date: 1/16/2012 12:39:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's "What You Will" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2012 7:24:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Outstanding write. Enjoyed. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:47:00 PM
CONGRATS ANDREA ON HM WITH THIS UNIQUE PIECE OF POETIC ART MY FRIEND...
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:42:00 PM
Congrats on your HM! a touching piece! email coming to you :)
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Date: 8/1/2011 12:32:00 AM
Perhaps not your mother, but I'm sure she would have loved to hear them just the same. Great poem Andrea and congrats on the win
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Date: 7/30/2011 7:34:00 AM
This is very beautiful! Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/29/2011 10:26:00 PM
what a beautiful, touching poem. there is no one like your Mother and when they are gone, you miss them so much. Take care. Lee
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Date: 7/29/2011 2:01:00 PM
A wonderful poem Andrea. Where are you hiding these days? Hope your arm and shoulder are getting better. love phyl
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