Opondi Ougo Poet Free verse

A Date With the Clouds

Walking in slow motion,
Hoping I'd join,
Stretching with caution,
To block the sun,
That lifting up my eyes,
Her curves I see,
The white balls,
On her chest,
The bulges,
Of her waist,
The blue dress,
The rest to guess,
I get it dear,
If only you were near,
I'd take you out,
For coffee,
To melt your innocence,
Into the cup,
Of my heart,
Beautiful clouds,
Smiling at me,
I'd really love to,
But I have no jet,
So i bet,
I can't be,
Your date

WORD CRAFT
2013

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David Scott June 10, 2013 at 12:08 PM WICKED WRITE LOVE THE PATTERN HERE WELL WRITTEN LOTS OF PASSION DAVDISCOTT Opondi Ougo June 12, 2013 at 2:45 AM Thanks Dave...your views really really, inspire :-)

Laura Breidenthal April 30, 2013 at 5:48 PM Awesome work, very vivid and romantic. Always, Laura Opondi Ougo May 2, 2013 at 2:45 AM Thank you a lot Laura,you always inspire..thank you once more and beautiful times,..Yours Word :-)

Pace Ink-U-Script April 3, 2013 at 8:11 AM Love your craft!! Opondi Ougo April 8, 2013 at 4:17 AM Thank you Script..your ink inspires me...each time you script an encouraging remark..i feel i owe you a good write...i'm so humbled,thanks for your time dear,i'm so grateful :-)

Debbie Duncan March 2, 2013 at 3:19 AM I do like the word play, nice. thank you for reading Wasn't ME ;} Opondi Ougo March 15, 2013 at 1:50 AM Oh,you welcome dear,i enjoyed ever bit of it...thanks a lot for taking time to read my work...and do have yourself a beautiful day :-)

Poet Destroyer A February 23, 2013 at 12:24 PM Word , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-) Opondi Ougo February 27, 2013 at 6:24 AM Aww..thank you Linda..I'm so humbled..much thanks :-)

Nate Spears February 20, 2013 at 2:32 PM Nice Poem!!! Opondi Ougo February 21, 2013 at 1:43 AM Thank you Nate. for the uplifting sentiments :-)

Bongani Zungu February 15, 2013 at 4:14 AM Craft, This is awesome buddy. I love it...........powerful stanza. If only you were near, I'd take you out, For coffee, To melt your innocence, Into the cup, Of my heart, Beautiful clouds, Smiling at me, I'd really love to, But I have no jet, So i bet, I can't be, Your date Opondi Ougo February 15, 2013 at 4:34 AM Thank you Zungu...i'm glad you love it..and i'm deeply humbled..have a good weekend..thank you :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2013 at 4:01 AM Welcome to the P-Soup. - You write very well, I like it. - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems and thoughts here with us. - Have a wonderful day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Opondi Ougo February 14, 2013 at 4:35 AM I'm so humbled Anne..i'm still learning..but you make me feel like family already.. thank you and do have yourself a beautiful day too :-)

Mari Banks February 12, 2013 at 9:43 PM "I'd take you out, For coffee, To melt your innocence, Into the cup, Of my heart" Now THAT's a nice one! I'd go out without hesitation on that note. lol Welcome and thanks for sharing! m Opondi Ougo February 13, 2013 at 6:01 AM wow thanks Mari...i'm so humbled...i'm glad you liked it...I'll be doing more of such thank you..and do have yourself lovely times :-)