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A Date With the Clouds

Walking in slow motion, Hoping I'd join, Stretching with caution, To block the sun, That lifting up my eyes, Her curves I see, The white balls, On her chest, The bulges, Of her waist, The blue dress, The rest to guess, I get it dear, If only you were near, I'd take you out, For coffee, To melt your innocence, Into the cup, Of my heart, Beautiful clouds, Smiling at me, I'd really love to, But I have no jet, So i bet, I can't be, Your date WORD CRAFT 2013

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David Scott

Date: 6/10/2013 12:08:00 PM

WICKED WRITE LOVE THE PATTERN HERE WELL WRITTEN LOTS OF PASSION DAVDISCOTT

Opondi Ougo
Date: 6/12/2013 2:45:00 AM

Thanks Dave...your views really really, inspire :-)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/30/2013 5:48:00 PM

Awesome work, very vivid and romantic. Always, Laura

Opondi Ougo
Date: 5/2/2013 2:45:00 AM

Thank you a lot Laura,you always inspire..thank you once more and beautiful times,..Yours Word :-)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/3/2013 8:11:00 AM

Love your craft!!

Opondi Ougo
Date: 4/8/2013 4:17:00 AM

Thank you Script..your ink inspires me...each time you script an encouraging remark..i feel i owe you a good write...i'm so humbled,thanks for your time dear,i'm so grateful :-)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/2/2013 3:19:00 AM

I do like the word play, nice. thank you for reading Wasn't ME ;}

Opondi Ougo
Date: 3/15/2013 1:50:00 AM

Oh,you welcome dear,i enjoyed ever bit of it...thanks a lot for taking time to read my work...and do have yourself a beautiful day :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/23/2013 12:24:00 PM

Word , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)

Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/27/2013 6:24:00 AM

Aww..thank you Linda..I'm so humbled..much thanks :-)

Nate Spears

Date: 2/20/2013 2:32:00 PM

Nice Poem!!!

Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/21/2013 1:43:00 AM

Thank you Nate. for the uplifting sentiments :-)

Bongani Zungu

Date: 2/15/2013 4:14:00 AM

Craft, This is awesome buddy. I love it...........powerful stanza. If only you were near, I'd take you out, For coffee, To melt your innocence, Into the cup, Of my heart, Beautiful clouds, Smiling at me, I'd really love to, But I have no jet, So i bet, I can't be, Your date

Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/15/2013 4:34:00 AM

Thank you Zungu...i'm glad you love it..and i'm deeply humbled..have a good weekend..thank you :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2013 4:01:00 AM

Welcome to the P-Soup. - You write very well, I like it. - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems and thoughts here with us. - Have a wonderful day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/14/2013 4:35:00 AM

I'm so humbled Anne..i'm still learning..but you make me feel like family already.. thank you and do have yourself a beautiful day too :-)

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/13/2013 3:07:00 PM

word craft??

Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/14/2013 4:35:00 AM

Oh yeah dear..that's the one..lol :-)

Mari Banks

Date: 2/12/2013 9:43:00 PM

"I'd take you out, For coffee, To melt your innocence, Into the cup, Of my heart" Now THAT's a nice one! I'd go out without hesitation on that note. lol Welcome and thanks for sharing! m

Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/13/2013 6:01:00 AM

wow thanks Mari...i'm so humbled...i'm glad you liked it...I'll be doing more of such thank you..and do have yourself lovely times :-)