A Date With Destini

I have a date with Destini today,
And my excitement is hard to restrain,
Since this excitement is hard to detain,
Whenever Destini comes out to play.
I know there is a price I have to pay,
In order for Destini to remain
The love that I am hoping to retain,
Thus, making "I Love You" easy to say.
I will hope and pray that this date goes well,
Praying and hoping that it never ends.
When it comes to love, I already fell,
Being destined to be more than just friends.
How much I love her is not hard to tell,
When you read the message that my heart sends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Williams Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 4:28 PM
SPEECHLESS!!!! love it dakarai
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February 3, 2011 at 10:02 PM
HELLO, DOC, WHAT A DATE.. ENJOYED~SKAT
Mehta Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 2:33 PM
I always the sonnets you write, dakarai. I suggest if you break it into octave and sestet would be easy to read with ease. dakarai
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