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A Dark Room

A dark room I stand in a room,a dark room. I try to see the light, but I can't. I try to shout, But I can't. I sit on a chair, I stand, I sit, I stand. Just like a light switch. My heart bleeds, Like a river, I have a fever, But not a dreamer. My name appears on the wall, As I wait for a call. My heart fills with darkness, And sadness becomes my middle name. What have I done to feel such pain? I don't get the answer what do I gain? Tears dripping down my face, I just need some space. As each drop reaches the ground, I can just feel my heart pound, One, Two, Three... I want to be free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/8/2015 1:17:00 PM
Karabo, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/7/2015 8:31:00 AM
Hello Karabo!! I just commented on your other fine poem today. As with my original welcome earlier to you today on your other poem, I most certainly second SKAT's "Welcome to Poetry Soup" below. She's a most wonderful poet, among others too within the Poetry Soup community!! There are indeed many fine poets in our community. You read their poetry and they will read yours. "A dark room" is a most powerful write. Its metaphor of captivity and its supporting imagery are perfect! A "7"! Cheers, Gary
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Date: 11/6/2015 9:27:00 PM
Karabo, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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