A Dark Night With a Full Moon

In the darkness you illuminate my way...
In the night sky you are as bright as the sun...
You shine brighter than any star at night...
You are the full moon...
On a very sad day you were a comfort to me...
And on any future or present sad days you will always be...
My guiding light in these dark days...
The beauty where music must come from...
Like a serenade of water you carry peace to some...
To others you bring wonder and curiosity...
But to me you will always be a source of life...
The only thing at night that keeps me from leaving myself...
You help me stay me just like does music...
If music was one day destroyed you would be a great solace to that pain...
Because I would still get to see you on some nights...
Melodies of the moon I will one day sing and write...


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As you can tell I really love the moon and music and I would also like to be a composer one 
day that is why I put "Melodies of the moon I will one day sing and write" and yes I am in 
band

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/15/2009 9:23:00 AM
this is beautiful, i too love the moon, and to sing and write, i cant read sheet music, yet, but ill get there one day...the moon guides me too, filling me with life and renewing my hope, it is she that i pray to, more so even then the sun, thank you for your beautiful writes. xoxo Rain Essence Cerdwin Keetly
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Date: 9/30/2009 12:15:00 PM
Your poem leaves me very curious... I love it!!!
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Date: 9/29/2009 11:15:00 PM
Priscilla, first, I wold like to thank you for your comments on my poetry. Second, this is a very beautiflul piece of work, and I hope that you are never lonely in the future. -GM
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