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A Dark Night

It was a dark night with a full moon I decide to go sit out on the porch The dark lake was lit up by a torch Feeling tired, hoping you are home soon As the water starts to ripple in the breeze I see a large creature emerge in the light Scared, I can’t move, I am frozen in fright I can barely breathe, as I start to wheeze It looks long and huge, and black in color Not really like a gator or any type of fish I watch and pray it goes away soon, I wish It swims closer to shore, and starts to hover I quickly run inside and lock my door Panic stricken, not sure what to do I hear a car door; I hope and pray it’s you I hear a helicopter, as I drop to the floor I wake up to your kisses on my lips I am in my bed with your arms around me I must have been dreaming, I smile with glee I start to get out of bed as your hands grip You say, I must have drunk way too much wine I was passed out on the floor when you came home I said I saw a huge creature, something scary, unknown Yes, you tell me, it’s a secret experiment, our goldmine 8/18/19 Contest: Writing Challenge 2, August 2019 - Enclosed Rhyme Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 8/23/2019 9:58:00 AM
Tania, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your Enclosed Rhyme. You amaze me how you can use any form and any theme to create a story, and this is a great one, you have a talent for storytelling !
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/23/2019 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Constance for your kind comments and my awesome placement in your contest, I feel honored! :)
Date: 8/23/2019 7:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Tania, I enjoyed your story, I want more. Hugs, John
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/23/2019 2:18:00 PM
Thank you John!
Date: 8/22/2019 11:29:00 PM
Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/22/2019 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations to you Tania, for your first place win with mysterious thrilling poem. xxoo
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/22/2019 7:21:00 PM
Thank you Connie!
Date: 8/19/2019 6:38:00 AM
Nice phases of the dark nights.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/19/2019 11:31:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/18/2019 11:30:00 AM
I think you should have more wine...Nice one
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/18/2019 12:45:00 PM
Thank you Arturo!

Book: Shattered Sighs