A Dark Night

It was a dark night with a full moon
I decide to go sit out on the porch
The dark lake was lit up by a torch
Feeling tired, hoping you are home soon

As the water starts to ripple in the breeze
I see a large creature emerge in the light
Scared, I can’t move, I am frozen in fright
I can barely breathe, as I start to wheeze

It looks long and huge, and black in color
Not really like a gator or any type of fish
I watch and pray it goes away soon, I wish
It swims closer to shore, and starts to hover

I quickly run inside and lock my door
Panic stricken, not sure what to do
I hear a car door; I hope and pray it’s you
I hear a helicopter, as I drop to the floor

I wake up to your kisses on my lips 
I am in my bed with your arms around me
I must have been dreaming, I smile with glee
I start to get out of bed as your hands grip

You say, I must have drunk way too much wine
I was passed out on the floor when you came home
I said I saw a huge creature, something scary, unknown
Yes, you tell me, it’s a secret experiment, our goldmine  

8/18/19

Contest: Writing Challenge 2, August 2019 - Enclosed Rhyme

Sponsor: Dear Heart
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La France Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Tania, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your Enclosed Rhyme. You amaze me how you can use any form and any theme to create a story, and this is a great one, you have a talent for storytelling !
Kitchin Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 2:18 PM
Thank you Constance for your kind comments and my awesome placement in your contest, I feel honored! :)
Gondolf Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Congrats on your win, Tania, I enjoyed your story, I want more. Hugs, John
Kitchin Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 2:18 PM
Thank you John!
Roper Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 11:29 PM
Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 7:10 PM
Congratulations to you Tania, for your first place win with mysterious thrilling poem. xxoo
Kitchin Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 7:21 PM
Thank you Connie!
Vijayakumar Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 6:38 AM
Nice phases of the dark nights.
Kitchin Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 11:31 AM
Thank you!
Michael Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 11:30 AM
I think you should have more wine...Nice one
Kitchin Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 12:45 PM
Thank you Arturo!
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