Amitabh Divakar Poet Concrete

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       If only

  all  of us

cd   walk 

     On water

   Fluid  Grace.   Free

  Poise  Surfaces         As

  As only  We can                       Air

            Conquer                             

       A ll waves.                                

     D ipping toes

     a t That One  

       n. ew  Crest

dan ce  on The  Surf   

          Tail   A Tiptoe

                    A     Few

      Happy             Word

           .    As.   I soak in

                                 Joys

                As.     I watch

        Patty                 Ornelas

Maneuvering on her Longboard

 

                If We Could Walk on Water ; 

                                 

                                      Dance. The Surf ; 

 

                                                               Free as Air

                         

 

A Dance On the Surf

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       If only
  all  of us
could walk 
     On water
   Fluid  Grace.   Free
  Poise  Surfaces         As
  As only  We can                       Air
            Conquer                             
       A ll waves.                                
     D ipping toes
     at That One  
        new   crest
 dance on The Surf   
           Tail  A Tiptoe
                    A     Few
      Happy             Word
           .    As.   I soak in
                                 Joys
                As.     I watch
        Patty                 Ornelas
Maneuvering on her Longboard

                If We Could Walk on Water ; 
                                 
                                      Dance. The Surf ; 

                                                               Free as Air

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