A Dance a Flow

I try to follow the flow
though your move is slow
I seem to be falling behind
falling falling behind 

I like the cadence
of your language 
it gives me a dance 
I love that beat that dance

give me that cadence 
that balanced   rhythmic flow
because l want to dance and dance
without feeling wrong or slow 

your voice dances its way
marches into my soul in that way
as it gently rises and falls like that
please don`t stop l adore  that…
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Mcdaid Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 6:06 AM
now that is dancing true beautiful piece
Twinkle Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 7:10 AM
simply beautiful visions ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 4:52 PM
Dropping by to say hello.
Sibanda Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 4:50 AM
Richard, l am ok. Thanks.
Harrell Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 4:22 PM
Very nice, Ndaba. I enjoyed the flow of your thought. Sweet one.
Sibanda Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 4:53 AM
Toquyen, thanks!
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 3:57 PM
- A nice poem to read - Like   your thoughts dancing in your lovely poem Ndaba. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 9:11 AM
When we don't know the steps even a slow dance is hard to follow. If we watch carefully we will soon be in step and can be fully in the moment. I enjoyed this metophor.
May Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 8:42 AM
nicely penned...I enjoyed the read
Kendrick Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 6:29 AM
Enjoyed reading your work that has good rhythm and flow to it..I am glad that I chosse this one today..I noticed that you dropped by my work..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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