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A Dampening of Rage

rage blood red simmering boiling over insecure imbeciles off gassing pain a fraternity of inbred hound dogs renting shepherds flocks are lost horror death soul lingers ghostly lights clarion calls the atomic spin of celestial night loss of foul ego conjoined particles wonder free falls I less bliss haunting rite

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Kash Poet

Date: 6/16/2011 10:58:00 AM

Just amazing....enjoyed...best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2011 9:37:00 PM

Not sure what this one is about, sweetie, but it looks like the kind of poem that Chris is really gonna dig!! SEems to have lots of symbolism! LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/16/2011 5:51:00 PM

Andie it was the journey of an unevolved human soul from life to death to absorbsion within the body of the Universe or God which ends with their souls awakening & rite is a double entrandre rite/right

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/15/2011 3:14:00 PM

Deep and thought-provoking, Deb. Especially like the line about "wonder free falls." Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2011 1:43:00 PM

Hello, D.G., gripping and deep... I mostly enjoyed the line~ the atomic spin of celestial night~~ that's one unique image. thanks for sharing,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/14/2011 7:46:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your amazing poetry this morning Debbie. Please keep sharing your writing with us. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/14/2011 2:03:00 AM

i feel your dark soul here, debs.. haunting, scary, beautiful! winner for me..:) huggs!

Cory Long

Date: 6/13/2011 6:04:00 PM

this is great I love this form.cory