Debbie Guzzi Poet Tetractys

A Dampening of Rage

rage
blood red
simmering
boiling over
insecure imbeciles off gassing pain

a fraternity of inbred hound dogs 
renting shepherds
flocks are lost
horror
death

soul
lingers
ghostly lights
clarion calls
the atomic spin of celestial night 

loss of foul ego conjoined particles 
wonder free falls
I less bliss
haunting
rite

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Kash Poet June 16, 2011 at 10:58 AM Just amazing....enjoyed...best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2011 at 9:37 PM Not sure what this one is about, sweetie, but it looks like the kind of poem that Chris is really gonna dig!! SEems to have lots of symbolism! LUv, Andrea Debbie Guzzi June 16, 2011 at 5:51 PM Andie it was the journey of an unevolved human soul from life to death to absorbsion within the body of the Universe or God which ends with their souls awakening & rite is a double entrandre rite/right

Carolyn Devonshire June 15, 2011 at 3:14 PM Deep and thought-provoking, Deb. Especially like the line about "wonder free falls." Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A June 14, 2011 at 1:43 PM Hello, D.G., gripping and deep... I mostly enjoyed the line~ the atomic spin of celestial night~~ that's one unique image. thanks for sharing,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown June 14, 2011 at 7:46 AM It was a pleasure to read your amazing poetry this morning Debbie. Please keep sharing your writing with us. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud June 14, 2011 at 2:03 AM i feel your dark soul here, debs.. haunting, scary, beautiful! winner for me..:) huggs!

Cory Long June 13, 2011 at 6:04 PM this is great I love this form.cory