Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

A Daily Consumed Society

A Daily Consumed Society

Man has changed and confused his principals.
What one day was culture, innocence and
shame, has degenerated into vulgarity, malice
and impurity.

What was a beautiful sentiment yesterday, of 
warmth, comprehension and love, has converted
into coldness, intotolerance and hate.

Our children learn what they see. Throughout 
their lives they encounter a pile of trash, which they 
consume step by step as they are growing up.

Obedience is a victim of indocility. The shame
has died, in the darkness of the grotesque and
a good man is characterized as an imbecile... 

Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Arlene Smith February 1, 2015 at 7:20 AM Bulls eye, dear friend!!.. The whole world seems to be bass ackwards these days!!... Hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2015 at 4:27 AM Miss you my sweet lady friend.. PD

Laura Breidenthal September 18, 2013 at 1:59 AM You are a poet of much wisdom. I love how your words flow. Excellent composition. Always, Laura

Richard Lamoureux March 16, 2013 at 6:20 PM what is indocility??

Richard Lamoureux March 16, 2013 at 6:18 PM Thanks for showing me to the english version. Check the spelling for comprehension. I enjoyed both versions.

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2013 at 10:26 PM It was great to see this in English after seeing it in spanish. I actually did understand the one in spanish. Probably the only part I had not understood in Spanish was the word indocility, which meaning I can guess, but I never used that word in English either!!

Dan Kearley January 23, 2013 at 7:40 PM Oh so true....Thank you for showing me this.I agree with these words to a "T" :o)

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet June 16, 2012 at 4:57 AM WOW THIS SAYS IT ALL !!!! STUPENDOUS WRITE DEAR POET!!!

Andrea Dietrich March 1, 2012 at 6:30 PM a powerful message here, Lucilla, and I can see it's something you really feel strongly about. It would be good for that one contest: Didactive? (I always forget how to spell it!!)

Carol Sunshine Brown February 23, 2012 at 12:27 PM I am enjoying reading some very diverse poetry today. I am glad yours was amongst the ones posted here that I was able to read and enjoy Lucilla. Love, Carol

David Williams February 23, 2012 at 11:26 AM Lucilla this is so true of today's moral values, I often wonder what the teen's of today will be like when they are tomorrow's adults, thanks for your comments and a warm welcome to the soup..David

Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2012 at 10:19 AM Lucilla, you have a wery good poem to share with us today, thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise