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A Dad's Answer To a Broken Heart

If I could do one thing for you I tell you what I would do I would harness the stars and maybe Mars And deliver them to you I would take moon glow and produce a show The world would not soon forget Then I would pack it up in a China cup And serve it to you alone You see one of the charms Is to throw my arms Tightly around my girl and dance with her Cause quite a stir and leave no doubt how I feel The world can be cruel but Remember this little rule and keep it in your heart I'm your dad and when you are sad is when my love will start To grow even more than it was before. I don't know how but I know it now You can always count on me So rest assured you are not ignored I love you with all my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/21/2012 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in John Heck's "Dazzled" contest Jeff. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2012 8:16:00 PM
how wonderfully sweet this is. What a lucky daughter. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/20/2012 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your smashing win xx
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Date: 8/20/2012 2:59:00 AM
Jeff congrats on your great win....outstandingly wonderful..David
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Date: 8/19/2012 10:46:00 PM
A touching poem, Jeff! Your love for your daughter is beautifully expressed. Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/19/2012 7:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win in my contest, Jeff. Wonderful! Peace always, J
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Date: 8/17/2012 5:59:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Jeff. I hope to be able to read more of your poems soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2012 3:09:00 PM
Wow! This is outstanding, if only all fathers were like you. Thanks for sharing this lovely heartfelt poem ~hugs~ Aimee
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