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A Dab of Spring

A shade of yellow, paint with blue Blemishes the canvass, all in crude Creativity in the lazy sky Dulled in myriad etches drawn Enthusiasm overwhelming Fields of hope now ascending God given blessings bestowed Heaven's a bliss to behold In the artist's loving hand Jaded with clues after clues Keen on its every detail Life time's own redemption Memoirs upon the final touch Nature's guise to reach heights Oils and pastels combined Portrait hung with grace Quite breezing one's mind Racing deep to the bosom Sunflowers waving its mother sun Thistles whispering sweet goodbyes Utopia on the majestic moon Vivaciously unified Wonders of an impressive grade, like Xylophones synced in harmony Yesterday's today an understatement Zephyr stirred within every stroke. 2/25/2015

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Date: 3/2/2015 1:00:00 AM
Perfect on spring Jeffrey! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:11:00 PM
Very nice one. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 2/28/2015 8:13:00 AM
I love the artist touch you bring to spring! Nicely done, and nice win!
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Date: 2/28/2015 12:12:00 AM
Jeffrey, Congratulations on your winning poem. This form was new to me too. It gives a lot to work with. A beautiful write! Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:18:00 PM
Jeffrey, Congratulations **SKAT LOVE**
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:14:00 PM
A great example of the form. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem 7 blessings
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Date: 2/27/2015 2:03:00 PM
The ABC’s have danced the spring dance and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats …Sara
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Date: 2/27/2015 6:33:00 AM
congrats on 2nd place Jeffrey good example of this form hugs
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Jeffrey Dela Cruz
Date: 2/27/2015 7:25:00 PM
Nice try on my first attempt huh? Thank you so much. :)
Date: 2/27/2015 6:23:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Jeffrey:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/25/2015 2:53:00 AM
Beautiful beauty flows in your words. My fav "sunflowers waving its mother's sun" .#7
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Date: 2/25/2015 2:27:00 AM
you painted a glorious picture - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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