Jeffrey Dela Cruz Poet Abecedarian

A Dab of Spring

A shade of yellow, paint with blue
Blemishes the canvass, all in crude
Creativity in the lazy sky
Dulled in myriad etches drawn
Enthusiasm overwhelming
Fields of hope now ascending
God given blessings bestowed
Heaven's a bliss to behold
In the artist's loving hand
Jaded with clues after clues
Keen on its every detail
Life time's own redemption
Memoirs upon the final touch
Nature's guise to reach heights
Oils and pastels combined
Portrait hung with grace
Quite breezing one's mind
Racing deep to the bosom
Sunflowers waving its mother sun
Thistles whispering sweet goodbyes
Utopia on the majestic moon
Vivaciously unified
Wonders of an impressive grade, like
Xylophones synced in harmony
Yesterday's today an understatement
Zephyr stirred within every stroke.

2/25/2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 2, 2015 at 1:00 AM Perfect on spring Jeffrey! Congrats on big win!

Andrea Dietrich February 28, 2015 at 7:11 PM Very nice one. Congrats for your win.

Casarah Nance February 28, 2015 at 8:13 AM I love the artist touch you bring to spring! Nicely done, and nice win!

Connie Marcum Wong February 28, 2015 at 12:12 AM Jeffrey, Congratulations on your winning poem. This form was new to me too. It gives a lot to work with. A beautiful write! Blessings, Connie

Skat A February 27, 2015 at 11:18 PM Jeffrey, Congratulations **SKAT LOVE**

Joyce Johnson February 27, 2015 at 11:14 PM A great example of the form. Congratulations. Joyce

Eve Roper February 27, 2015 at 11:11 PM Congratulations on your wonderful poem 7 blessings

Sara Kendrick February 27, 2015 at 2:03 PM The ABC’s have danced the spring dance and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats …Sara

Shadow Hamilton February 27, 2015 at 6:33 AM congrats on 2nd place Jeffrey good example of this form hugs Jeffrey Dela Cruz February 27, 2015 at 7:25 PM Nice try on my first attempt huh? Thank you so much. :)

Jan Allison February 27, 2015 at 6:23 AM Dropping back with my congrats Jeffrey:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Njeri Hunjeri February 25, 2015 at 2:53 AM Beautiful beauty flows in your words. My fav "sunflowers waving its mother's sun" .#7

Jan Allison February 25, 2015 at 2:27 AM you painted a glorious picture - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx