A Dab of Spring

A shade of yellow, paint with blue
Blemishes the canvass, all in crude
Creativity in the lazy sky
Dulled in myriad etches drawn
Enthusiasm overwhelming
Fields of hope now ascending
God given blessings bestowed
Heaven's a bliss to behold
In the artist's loving hand
Jaded with clues after clues
Keen on its every detail
Life time's own redemption
Memoirs upon the final touch
Nature's guise to reach heights
Oils and pastels combined
Portrait hung with grace
Quite breezing one's mind
Racing deep to the bosom
Sunflowers waving its mother sun
Thistles whispering sweet goodbyes
Utopia on the majestic moon
Vivaciously unified
Wonders of an impressive grade, like
Xylophones synced in harmony
Yesterday's today an understatement
Zephyr stirred within every stroke.

2/25/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/2/2015 1:00:00 AM
Perfect on spring Jeffrey! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:11:00 PM
Very nice one. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 2/28/2015 8:13:00 AM
I love the artist touch you bring to spring! Nicely done, and nice win!
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Date: 2/28/2015 12:12:00 AM
Jeffrey, Congratulations on your winning poem. This form was new to me too. It gives a lot to work with. A beautiful write! Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:18:00 PM
Jeffrey, Congratulations **SKAT LOVE**
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:14:00 PM
A great example of the form. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem 7 blessings
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Date: 2/27/2015 2:03:00 PM
The ABC’s have danced the spring dance and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats …Sara
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Date: 2/27/2015 6:33:00 AM
congrats on 2nd place Jeffrey good example of this form hugs
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Jeffrey Dela Cruz
Date: 2/27/2015 7:25:00 PM
Nice try on my first attempt huh? Thank you so much. :)
Date: 2/27/2015 6:23:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Jeffrey:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/25/2015 2:53:00 AM
Beautiful beauty flows in your words. My fav "sunflowers waving its mother's sun" .#7
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Date: 2/25/2015 2:27:00 AM
you painted a glorious picture - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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