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A CUP OF POSITIVITY

I feel so warm cozy at peace Stirring honey in my tea It grounds me as if a magnet pulls me From the top of my head to the rear of my seat Soul is relaxed and focused on Zen Tranquility and calm I’m sipping in My third eye has super sight Happy I am inside and all is right

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 1/2/2024 1:42:00 AM

Sweet words of peace with a sage drink! You could have entered it in Sipping coffee contest but has to be 10 lines and must be about coffee. Coffee is not as calming as Tea!

Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2024 5:18:00 AM

I agree tea is more calming Krish. But I bet coffee drinkers disagree lol! As for the contest I notice there is healthy competition! lol I don’t stand a chance if I do enter. Thanks

Paige Hind

Date: 12/27/2023 6:24:00 PM

Lovely poetry about tea. I loved about how it fixes your right in your seat. :) Great work!

Karen Jones
Date: 12/28/2023 5:24:00 AM

Hi Paige so glad you liked it! Hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/27/2023 1:09:00 PM

Hi Karen, This is my kind “ drink” . I’ll take the biggest cup you got until it fills over.Wishing you a Merry Holiday Season! ;-)Alexis

Karen Jones
Date: 12/27/2023 5:20:00 PM

Hugs Alexis hope your cup runs over

Pardy Mupfumbu

Date: 12/26/2023 5:46:00 AM

Good ink Karen, thoughtful indeed

Karen Jones
Date: 12/26/2023 6:21:00 AM

Thanks so much Pardy.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/24/2023 5:17:00 PM

I liked this poem. I've been drinking coffee but perhaps tea is more calming. Keep up your meditation. You seem happy.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/26/2023 6:20:00 AM

I am happy and thank you for liking it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/23/2023 7:51:00 PM

You have connected with 'Unseeking Seeker,' methinks. See you in the world of infinite possibility! :) Gershon

Karen Jones
Date: 12/23/2023 9:21:00 PM

What a compliment! Thanks Gershwin!

Tom Woody

Date: 12/23/2023 9:09:00 AM

Positivity! Now that's what I'm talkin' bout. More Earl Grey, please ...

Karen Jones
Date: 12/23/2023 2:04:00 PM

Earl Grey is on the way Tom ! Lol Happy holidays.

Silent One

Date: 12/22/2023 11:04:00 AM

Sounds awesome, your poem beautifully captures a moment of tranquillity and contentment, creating a vivid sensory experience that resonates with warmth and peace. The simplicity of the language contributes to the intimacy of the scene, and the reader can easily connect with the emotions expressed.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/22/2023 12:19:00 PM

Aw thanks for reading Silent One.

Susan Manley

Date: 12/22/2023 9:09:00 AM

I should like to have tea with you. And ask you about your third eye.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/22/2023 9:29:00 AM

Would love a cup with you. I sometimes dream things that happen. I don't consider myself psychic but maybe just different. That's it. Lol

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/22/2023 7:23:00 AM

I really enjoyed reading your fun tea write. I love tea hot/ice cold. Now enjoy your drink as you write away. Merry Christmas..................

Karen Jones
Date: 12/22/2023 7:28:00 AM

Merry Christmas Paula and thanks for reading!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/22/2023 6:44:00 AM

Wow, this poem truly radiates cozy vibes, dear Karen. Sometimes, these soul nourishing sips of healing, peace, love and kindness are all that our souls desire! In this wintry ambience, I felt warmth in these words.. You've so gorgeously knitted the emotions here. "Soul is relaxed and focused on Zen,Tranquility and calm I’m sipping in,My third eye has super sight" A beautiful write... Sending you light :)

Karen Jones
Date: 12/22/2023 6:54:00 AM

Hugs Hiya thanks for reading and liking. I feel it falls short but glad you enjoy it.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/22/2023 6:36:00 AM

A cup of positivity is all we need too! I love how creatively you’ve written this dear karen. You’ve really nailed it especially “ Tranquility and calm I’m sipping in My third eye has super sight“ soothing! So good! And the rhymes are excellent! Best wishes if this is for the contest

Karen Jones
Date: 12/22/2023 6:53:00 AM

I don't think it is good enough for the contest but I may enter it anyway. I'm on the fence. Thanks