A CUP OF POSITIVITY

I feel so warm cozy at peace
Stirring honey in my tea
It grounds me as if a magnet pulls me
From the top of my head to the rear of my seat

Soul is relaxed and focused on Zen
Tranquility and calm I’m sipping in
My third eye has super sight
Happy I am inside and all is right
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Radhakrishna Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 1:42 AM
Sweet words of peace with a sage drink! You could have entered it in Sipping coffee contest but has to be 10 lines and must be about coffee. Coffee is not as calming as Tea!
Jones Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 5:18 AM
I agree tea is more calming Krish. But I bet coffee drinkers disagree lol! As for the contest I notice there is healthy competition! lol I don’t stand a chance if I do enter. Thanks
Hind Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 6:24 PM
Lovely poetry about tea. I loved about how it fixes your right in your seat. :) Great work!
Jones Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:24 AM
Hi Paige so glad you liked it! Hugs
Y. Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 1:09 PM
Hi Karen, This is my kind “ drink” . I’ll take the biggest cup you got until it fills over.Wishing you a Merry Holiday Season! ;-)Alexis
Jones Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 5:20 PM
Hugs Alexis hope your cup runs over
Mupfumbu Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Good ink Karen, thoughtful indeed
Jones Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 6:21 AM
Thanks so much Pardy.
Greenhough Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 5:17 PM
I liked this poem. I've been drinking coffee but perhaps tea is more calming. Keep up your meditation. You seem happy.
Jones Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 6:20 AM
I am happy and thank you for liking it.
Wolf Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 7:51 PM
You have connected with 'Unseeking Seeker,' methinks. See you in the world of infinite possibility! :) Gershon
Jones Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 9:21 PM
What a compliment! Thanks Gershwin!
One Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 11:04 AM
Sounds awesome, your poem beautifully captures a moment of tranquillity and contentment, creating a vivid sensory experience that resonates with warmth and peace. The simplicity of the language contributes to the intimacy of the scene, and the reader can easily connect with the emotions expressed.
Jones Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 12:19 PM
Aw thanks for reading Silent One.
Manley Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 9:09 AM
I should like to have tea with you. And ask you about your third eye.
Jones Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 9:29 AM
Would love a cup with you. I sometimes dream things that happen. I don't consider myself psychic but maybe just different. That's it. Lol
Goldsmith Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 7:23 AM
I really enjoyed reading your fun tea write. I love tea hot/ice cold. Now enjoy your drink as you write away. Merry Christmas..................
Jones Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 7:28 AM
Merry Christmas Paula and thanks for reading!
Sharma  Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 6:44 AM
Wow, this poem truly radiates cozy vibes, dear Karen. Sometimes, these soul nourishing sips of healing, peace, love and kindness are all that our souls desire! In this wintry ambience, I felt warmth in these words.. You've so gorgeously knitted the emotions here. "Soul is relaxed and focused on Zen,Tranquility and calm I’m sipping in,My third eye has super sight" A beautiful write... Sending you light :)
Jones Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 6:54 AM
Hugs Hiya thanks for reading and liking. I feel it falls short but glad you enjoy it.
Empress Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 6:36 AM
A cup of positivity is all we need too! I love how creatively you’ve written this dear karen. You’ve really nailed it especially “ Tranquility and calm I’m sipping in My third eye has super sight“ soothing! So good! And the rhymes are excellent! Best wishes if this is for the contest
Jones Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 6:53 AM
I don't think it is good enough for the contest but I may enter it anyway. I'm on the fence. Thanks
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