A Crying Snake

scream from the snake's tail got a tad reckless, my scene. The fruit you shouldn't eat. as lost as I am, oh god. Evil had dissolved the brain.
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Sambourne Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 3:39 PM
I enjoyed the biblical allusion here, Lasaad. There are, indeed, consequences to what we nibble on. Well expressed posting! Best wishes, Brian
Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 2:40 PM
I often wonder what man would do and be if he/she had not eaten the forbidden. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara
Buehler Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 11:27 AM
Gripping and marvelously expressed, my friend. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 12:56 AM
The beginning of all our ills, I'm afraid.
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