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A Crying Snake

scream from the snake's tail got a tad reckless, my scene. The fruit you shouldn't eat. as lost as I am, oh god. Evil had dissolved the brain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/22/2021 3:39:00 PM
I enjoyed the biblical allusion here, Lasaad. There are, indeed, consequences to what we nibble on. Well expressed posting! Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 12/11/2021 2:40:00 PM
I often wonder what man would do and be if he/she had not eaten the forbidden. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara
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Date: 12/11/2021 11:27:00 AM
Gripping and marvelously expressed, my friend. :)
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Date: 12/11/2021 12:56:00 AM
The beginning of all our ills, I'm afraid.
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