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A Cry In the Dark

A Poem by: Tim Bryant ___________________ Fluid pours out, a weep begins Sadness follows wretched morning Tones of acid, hell wells within! Frayed endings a shattered life sins Mountains walk between us scorning Fluid pours out, a weep begins Beyond the grave, they feel no winds She rests there tasting in mourning Tones of acid, hell wells within! All the while, twiddling thumbs ends With hate of feelings, no warning, Fluid pours out, a weep begins The throes of pain a reminder grins In reflection, drinking forlorn Tones of acid, hell wells within! Bubbling up, sound of cry lends To the feeling of rage forming, Fluid pours out, a weep begins, Tones of acid, hell wells within! -------------------------------------- For: Michael J Falotico's Contest "Sounds of a Cry"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/14/2011 1:52:00 PM
I really love this, you really have a way with words tim. read a few of your peices today. very talented. thank you for sharing it love windy
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the sounds of a cry contest Tim
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:17:00 AM
Congrats with this winner Tim blessings Paul
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Michael's "Sound Of A Cry" contest Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 3:54:00 AM
hey Tim, congrats on your win. David
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your well rendered villanelle and your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:16:00 PM
Congrats Tim on an exciting win with this excellent poetry so prolific luv..
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Date: 8/1/2011 6:47:00 PM
Sound of a cry indeed, deep dark images to probe the mind Tim. Well said!
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