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A Crown of Rays

The sun waits in the shadows, ready to crown the morning with gold If I could fold the suns rays, form them into a crown of gold Then you my lovely princess, would always be decked in silver and gold

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Maria Williams

Date: 9/17/2024 4:04:00 AM

This is short poem contains such a wealth of imagination woven into pictures. Hugs Maria

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2024 1:46:00 PM

Ahh!! How romantic. I enjoyed reading this one today. Sara K

Marugu Mo
Date: 9/11/2024 1:42:00 AM

Thx Sara!

Ink Empress

Date: 9/7/2024 11:32:00 AM

Awwn this is so sweet! “ would always be decked in silver and gold” i love that the most! So very well written and expressed and i love how you’ve used the sun and nature to express here! So touching! Pleasure reading this gem! Sending you light always

Marugu Mo
Date: 9/8/2024 6:33:00 AM

Thanks Inky

Tom Woody

Date: 9/4/2024 5:38:00 AM

What a lovely sentiment. What princess wouldn't be honored by such a gesture?

Marugu Mo
Date: 9/8/2024 6:33:00 AM

Thanks Tom