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A Crowded Place

Drowsiness envelopes... Under a starless night Where light from an old tungsten bulb Faintly penetrate a tree's thin leaves My mind seeks a nostalgia I never seemed to find. A faint cold breeze blew, Whispering memories of a distant past... I yearn for the wind For the rain and the storm Though it reminds me of a certain death... My Death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/7/2022 1:43:00 PM
Wow, this is wonderful... where light from a tungsten bulb penetrates a tree's thin leaves. Sounds like you are standing on a porch at night, remembering, and hoping for some return. Lovely, well-crafted poem.
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Date: 6/2/2023 1:21:00 AM
Thank you. I truly appreciate your kind comment.<3

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