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A Crippled Holiday

Holidays shape the overspilling
bounds of aromas. Hidden possessions
dismissed away, packed in a wardrobe
banished to an unforgiven loneliness.
A protested chaos snapped
unpleasant whispering,
interruptimg nature's
beauty, hope, and
sweetness of a special
occasion. Alongside belonged
twisting frustration furied by the
enormous danger hesitant to a wave
and smile of polite luxury.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/1/2016 11:27:00 PM

nice to see this one again, Lavore.. LINDA

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/9/2014 7:15:00 AM

sweet congrats!

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/7/2014 1:15:00 PM

Lavore, this is a powerful poem....holidays seem to heighten the frustration and pain of past wrongs. So well written. Congratulations.

Christine Costello

Date: 9/7/2014 11:13:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

Lavore Bland

Date: 9/7/2014 5:38:00 AM

Thank you everyone for your support and cheeriness. Sorry if I seem to not be here its just I have a very busy life .

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/7/2014 5:28:00 AM

Brilliant n powerful write Lavore! Congrats on big win!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/6/2014 6:57:00 PM

WOW! Excellent powerful write! Very inspirational! Congratulations on a well-deserved great win! Pandita

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/6/2014 5:59:00 PM

congratulations on your win.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/6/2014 5:11:00 PM

this was a deep, profound one, very unusual, with good use of language; a very striking piece indeed - congrats on your win in my contest :)

Skat A

Date: 9/2/2014 6:32:00 PM

Lavore, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 8:25:00 AM

Lavore, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2014 1:18:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Lavore - I choose your first great written poem- You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)