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A Cricket's Melody

Leaping into the fog of night chirps brightly , acapella to awaken an instant thrill with moistened wing-pads flicking-- a bug wiggles like a ribbon caught now in my glassy jar! Night Creatures/ nette onclaud Gabby Sabre / 15 Jan 2015 No.6/ Cricket

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Date: 1/21/2015 7:06:00 PM
Gabby, congratulations on your win, nice pen. Eve
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Date: 1/21/2015 2:23:00 PM
wow, this one is fantastic. One of the very best. Congrats for the well deserved win.
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Date: 1/21/2015 1:47:00 PM
Ahhh!!!: ) SK
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Date: 1/21/2015 7:34:00 AM
Reminds me of catching bugs as a child, but mine always died in the jar...awesome win, Gabby, congrats...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/20/2015 9:28:00 PM
Oh do set it free Gabby my friend,, lovely write! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 1/20/2015 7:23:00 PM
Oh that's good luck keep him safe! Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 1/20/2015 3:52:00 PM
Congrats Gabby on the win. Nicely written
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Date: 1/20/2015 2:51:00 PM
Love the a capella melody of the crickets, Gabby!! You caught a beauty in the night. Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 1/20/2015 2:20:00 PM
Wonderful imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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