Gabby Sabre Poet Verse

A Cricket's Melody

 Leaping into the fog of night
chirps brightly , acapella
to awaken an instant thrill
with moistened wing-pads flicking--
a bug wiggles like a ribbon
caught now in my glassy jar!




Night Creatures/ nette onclaud
Gabby Sabre / 15 Jan 2015
No.6/ Cricket

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Eve Roper January 21, 2015 at 7:06 PM Gabby, congratulations on your win, nice pen. Eve

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2015 at 2:23 PM wow, this one is fantastic. One of the very best. Congrats for the well deserved win.

Sara Kendrick January 21, 2015 at 1:47 PM Ahhh!!!: ) SK

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 21, 2015 at 7:34 AM Reminds me of catching bugs as a child, but mine always died in the jar...awesome win, Gabby, congrats...hugs, Rhonda

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 20, 2015 at 9:28 PM Oh do set it free Gabby my friend,, lovely write! Congrats on big win!

Debbie Guzzi January 20, 2015 at 7:23 PM Oh that's good luck keep him safe! Congrad's on your win. Light & love

John Lawless January 20, 2015 at 3:52 PM Congrats Gabby on the win. Nicely written

Paul Callus January 20, 2015 at 2:51 PM Love the a capella melody of the crickets, Gabby!! You caught a beauty in the night. Congrats on your fine win. // paul

Jan Allison January 20, 2015 at 2:20 PM Wonderful imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx