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A Crescent Moon Smiles This Day

. There like the bloom of a mystical flower, a crescent moon smiles this day Before the sun comes to offer good morning, bright its illumined display While here I stand gazing north towards the heavens, dreaming of days yet to be Watching the glow on an autumn horizon, I feel it grinning at me Picturing moments of enchanted splendor, beautiful scenes float my eyes Seeking a sign as the dawn now awakens, upon these slumbering skies When in a whisper this moon sends a message, softly it says from above “Here in this smile my crescent is showing, know she is sending her love” This is the first poem I posted on soup. I am not new to the site but find I learn something new every time I stop in to read. I actually like this poem because the moon is always an inspiration to me. As well, the wonderful poets I have met on this site always inspire me to be better.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/9/2020 7:45:00 AM

Love: Here in this smile my crescent is showing. The moon, from our vantage point, just a small light in the sky, but how it inspires, has regular cutouts, shines bright over lovers and wondrous nights. And I see I’m revisiting but I love it!

Luke Hobbs

Date: 12/8/2019 1:57:00 AM

A very enjoyable read. I love moon imagery and you've done an excellent job of keeping the reader's interest. The rhyme scheme helps to soften the mood of the poem.

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 9:45:00 AM

Thanks so much for all of your comments on my poetry. I appreciate you stopping by this weekend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/18/2019 2:13:00 PM

Enjoyable to read. It is nostalgic to look back at the comments. Some have moved on since these early days.

Chris Green
Date: 9/18/2019 3:19:00 PM

Thanks Richard. It is sad, I miss a lot of these folks.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 5/23/2019 9:04:00 AM

I guess I did not realize by deleting my account all my comments would disappear too!;( that's so sad I am so sorry! I didn't stop to think when I deleted it!:(

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/6/2017 12:04:00 PM

Chris, Congratulations on your win in my contest! bloom of mystical flower, crescent moon smiles, dawn awakens, slumbering skies. Glad you were on my list!

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 9/6/2017 11:59:00 AM

Awesome, Chris. Congrats on your win!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/20/2017 12:59:00 PM

Thought I'd come back to the beginning. Lovely poem, one of my best friends the moon she be, you have done her justice here my friend. hugs mo

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/18/2017 1:29:00 PM

And what do I find my friend? I raced here to read your first poem and find this massive golden nugget, written in such some, easy to read and stellar verses.. and sending such inspiring thoughts of what true love and joy are.. A fav and A10.

Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 1:57:00 PM

Thanks so much Robert. This is a step back in time for me. :)

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/11/2017 3:37:00 PM

It's a rainy Saturday, so I stroll through your poetry from the beginning! This is gorgeous, I love how effortlessly it flows from one beautiful scene to the next. You write of nature so elegantly, it is such a joy to read. Fabulous title too! A fave, 7+++ many blessings to you, lynn

Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 1:54:00 PM

Thank you so very much Lynn. Sorry for this extremely late reply, that I know you won't see.

Darren White

Date: 1/15/2017 12:42:00 AM

Went back to your first poem here, and it made me smile a crescent :) I love the unique way you always weave nature and love together.

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 8:35:00 AM

Thanks so very much Darren, wow, I had almost forgotten about this one. Thanks so much for going back into the vault for a bit.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/13/2017 4:46:00 AM

Yes, beautiful smooth poem! jimbo

Chris Green
Date: 1/13/2017 8:07:00 AM

Thanks so very much Jimbo

Becca Teagan

Date: 12/2/2016 12:10:00 PM

Hi Chris, I just thought I'd come and read the first poem you posted here... and I'm not disappointed... this is absolutely stunning... I love it.

Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 12:49:00 PM

Thank you so very much Rebecca. I am thrilled you went out and found this one and enjoyed it so much.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/2/2016 10:51:00 AM

Elegant poetry, Chris. It flows w/such rhythm and grace. Beautiful poem, my friend. The language is lovely, the imagery is vividly artistic. Love always. RW

Chris Green
Date: 11/2/2016 11:15:00 AM

Thank you so much Freddie for your kind and encouraging words today. I appreciate your visit to my world.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/19/2016 10:26:00 PM

Congratulations Chris for being featured this week , Great write!!

Chris Green
Date: 10/20/2016 6:12:00 AM

Thanks so much Daniel.

White Wolf

Date: 10/11/2016 6:40:00 PM

Awesome poem mate, I wanted to check out your first entry and I wasn't disappointed.... Top write this /|\

Chris Green
Date: 10/12/2016 3:12:00 PM

Thanks so very much Rick. I appreciate that.

Skat A

Date: 10/7/2016 11:49:00 PM

Chris, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2016 4:23:00 PM

Thank you so very much Skat for your kind words and this warm welcome. I appreciate your encouraging comment and look forward to reading you and getting to know you better. Thanks so much again

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/7/2016 8:21:00 AM

Chris, Superb...Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love

Chris Green
Date: 10/7/2016 9:08:00 AM

Thanks so very much Manmath for your kind words and for the welcome greeting. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poem.

Morgan Ballantyne

Date: 10/6/2016 4:49:00 PM

Beautiful...captured that calm yet approaching unease and beauty that comes in the dawn or those wee forgotten hours of the morning.

Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2016 4:53:00 PM

Thank you so much Morgan for your kind comments. I appreciate your visit to my poetry and I am happy you enjoyed it.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/6/2016 11:26:00 AM

Very nice Chris. I enjoy writing/reading about odes to the moon.

Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2016 11:37:00 AM

Thanks so much Chris. I am glad you liked this one. I wrote it a few days ago after arriving at work early and seeing a crescent moon in the sky smiling.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2016 9:04:00 AM

Beautiful, Chris, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2016 9:09:00 AM

Thank you Linda for this wonderful welcome. I appreciate your kindness. My poetic skills? It depends on what inspires me on any given day. Usually my theme will revolve around love but I can get dark and a little crazy at times. I will be happy to stop by and read some of your work. Thanks so much again.

Paloma P

Date: 10/6/2016 6:42:00 AM

Elegantly stellar poetry. Rhymes and meter are impeccable. A definite 7 all the way...

Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2016 8:52:00 AM

Thank you so very much Paloma for your kind thoughts