A Crescendo, Then a Starburst

This dreamlike creature beside me in bed With long golden tresses and lips of red Eyes like blue sapphires and skin like satin All packaged up in a womanly wrapping She raises her body as we both breathe as one She caresses my face, the passion's begun There's no turning back on this magical ride We ascend ever skyward, we're burning inside We explode with emotion enveloped in love As we ride on a zephyr to the heaven's above A crescendo, then a starburst, we rest on a cloud Proclaiming devotion as we sing it out loud © Jack Ellison 2013
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Jones Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 4:57 PM
Aahhhhhhhhhhh..........:-)
Ellison Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 8:08 AM
Aahhhhhhhhhhh.......... thank you dear Donna! xoxoxox
Hicks Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 2:53 PM
This has to be one of the most poetic titles I've ever seen by you. The whole piece was quite whimsical and made me wish to sleep outside in a hammock... and just let my imagination run wild, looking up at the stars. Wonderful, Jack! Not what I typically expect from, but a great surprise nonetheless.
Ellison Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 8:07 AM
A SURPRISE??? Surprised me too! Don't what happened! LOL Now back to the sillies...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 1:16 PM
sooooooooooo nice Jack xx
Ellison Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 8:06 AM
Thank you sooooooooooooo much! Huggeroonies xoxoxox
Onclaud Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 12:39 PM
such a sentimental, winsome piece that allows me to see you in a different light... off to the skyline you go... wonderfully worded!..:) huggs!
Ellison Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 8:05 AM
A different light... oh yeah! Don't know what happened... maybe coz went off my medication! LOL Hugs, Silly Jack xoxox
Eastman Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Wow! Cathie must really be impressed with this one! I am... And it's not even funny... You know, maybe my dragon might act better with a girl friend to impress... uuummmm... He might not poo on my roses if he has a girl friend he wants to give them tooo...
Ellison Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 11:27 AM
Don't know what happened here! No silliness, just passion and starbursts and stuff! HUH! LOL Hugs, Jack xoxoxox
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