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A Creature of the Canopies

Manhattan hi-rise nestles a yawning head-in-the-clouds woman ready for another consumptive day. Shod in Choo's, coifed in beige arising from a long slender nape, she leaves her nest after a wave to Amin, her Bichon Frise. Down-to-the-lobby sashay, swinging a Gucci full of plastic, belies an air of loneliness as she walks to a waiting limousine. Always caged, the smile is frozen beneath a botoxed brow. And the point of it all? Well, for this life ... there isn't one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/21/2010 6:30:00 PM
the way of the whirling dervish! I call it! well done, Sue! jamesy
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Date: 3/20/2010 3:41:00 PM
Emptiness is as emptiness does- so to speak, Sue...! I like this, very much. Thanks for the kind comments. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/20/2010 1:07:00 PM
VERY NICE LOVED IT HOPE FOR CONTEST IF SO GOOD LUCK AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENTS FALESHIA
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Date: 3/20/2010 10:39:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words, Sue. Soup mail returned!
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Date: 3/19/2010 10:24:00 AM
Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Sue. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2010 1:25:00 PM
Love it Sue lol - Like your style - Excellent write indeed - Thanks for a fab share -:)
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:48:00 PM
I like it, enjoyed today.
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Date: 3/18/2010 11:57:00 AM
No need to try to dress up or cover up what we really are, Sue. The truth always rises to the surface. You made a valid statement here and I totally agree -- such behavior is pointless! Love, Carolyn
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