A Creation Evolving

A Creation Evolving 


Perfection given,perfection lost 

Corrupted, flawed ,exiled 

With all he can carry 

he sets out full of hope and ideas 

only to repeatedly end this journey 

beaten and weak, yet he continues 

This is man.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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