A Cowpokes Prayer

Lord, I ain't good at prayin', I hope You'll fergive me fer that,
But I need to pause by this Colorady spruce fer a little chat.
It's been a very tryin' day a-herdin' dogies an' fixin' fences,
So please lend Yer ear whilst I unwind an' enjoy Yer vast expanses.

Lord, it's been mighty hot an' dusty on th' lonely trail today;
Sometimes I wonder why I cowboy - it shore ain't fer the pay.
But I love Yer wide-open ranges, fer me that's my compensation.
I'll never cease to wonder at th' grandeur uv Yer Creation!

Lord, help me to allus take plenty uv time to look an' ponder,
At th' majesty uv that snow-capped mountain range over yonder.
May I allus savor th' smell uv sagebrush an' fragrant pine,
An' th' sunsets that You paint jes' fer me that are so divine.

You know I git irate a-herdin' them wily cows and steers,
An' I git to cussin' which is so displeasin' to Yer ears.
Yer within Yer rights to brand me th' worst sinner on th' earth,
But, Lord, I'm a-tryin' to do my best to live a life uv worth.

Lord, I'm a-thankin' Ye fer th' good an' faithful hoss I ride,
Even fer Cooky's chuck uv beans an' bacon that I must abide.
I can't thank Ye enough for Yer forgiveness an' faithful love;
I hope You'll see fit to brand me fer Yer heavenly corral above!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (© All Rights Reserved)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 9/13/2012 7:09:00 AM
Here i am again, hankin' to learn, and not disappointed, i'll say it again Robert, these poems of yours should be archived, so the whole world can share in your wonderful stories!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 7/22/2010 2:42:00 PM
Going way back I found one that I haven't read...Great expression of your faith penned in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 6/16/2010 6:13:00 PM
Bob you had me in tears. My birth date is 1-8-37 and I always said I was born a hundred years too late. Then when I used my birthdate for my email name I about fell of the chair laughing. We were raised on horses and I still believe I was born a hundred years late. You wrote my soul in this poem. Thanks, God Bless, Cile
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Date: 4/12/2010 12:34:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Robert. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2010 5:44:00 AM
Big congrats Bob on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a unique write to feature and share ...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/7/2010 8:02:00 PM
Unique poetry Bob from a "cowboy" perspective.. luv the connotation on word play with changing the speaking sequences.. very ingenious.. enjoyed and thankxxx for your lovely comments tonight.. blessings.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/12/2010 11:24:00 AM
Delightful rhyme Robert >> James
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Date: 1/4/2010 2:44:00 PM
The significant thing is that I can hear your voice ... to write in a consistent voice is like a beautiful woman comfortable in her skin. This was a pleasure to read.
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